Black Poetry : Unapproachable You!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So unapproachable
    Always over emotional
    Like a pot about to boil
    over, stuff about to spill
    all over.

    Brothers avoid ya , though
    you look so fine and together
    yet you never smile for no
    reason. Complain about every
    season! And always find fault
    but not in yourself!

    Sisters who love you and think
    enough of you.
    Should have told you long time
    ago.
    Oh, no sista no!

    Take all of your yesterday blues
    and all of the "no good brothers
    blues", to another corner , cause
    Pity Party's are not allowed.
    How dare you diminish yourself
    out loud!

    So unapproachable, and incroachable
    never wrong, but always , always
    alone!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Wonder when that man is going to
    call you on the phone.
    Or when your boss is going to place
    you on that throne.

    Let down the wall that seperates us all.
    Forgive yourself for not loving yourself
    enough , anyway, you can start today
    So much inside you want to share, but
    would you dare? All you do is sit and stare
    not wanting to risk anything and wanting
    everything!

    Open wide your arms and your heart,
    there is a good start!
    Smile just because you can.
    Hug yourself if you don't have a man.
    Let love shine through you.
    And then love will come to you!

    BJS (2002)c
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOHHHHHH I NEED TO EMAIL THIS TO SOMEONE...

    NOTE TO SELF: SHOW NO EMOTION AS YOU HIT THE 'SEND' BUTTON ON HOTMAIL...

    poet...poet...poet...you have truly hit a reminiscent nerve with this one. how good it is to see that men are not the only ones that can see such a person...

    can i buy you lunch for this one? well... can i at least email you a picture of lunch :D

    jes' playin'

    tight scribe no doubt...

    one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again captured

    in da essence of ya flow ....dis piece
    walked me inside and touched my mental
    poetess ya vibe u scribe is tyght
    i agree wit MR.D......gone wit ya bad self!:)
     
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    I know someone I can send this to as well......You did it with this one....But as for me I want all my emotion to show when I send this one........If dnommo buys you lunch, I'll buy dinner.....
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IF THEY FIT IT, HIT EM WITH IT!

    AHHHHHHHHHH!
    My greatest joy is a hearty response .
    Thanks Brotha's!

    Bishop,
    Where is the Watcher, tell him Fantasy girl says hello!

    And again Rich you know...:toast:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He's Watching.....as always....
     
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    You rang fantasy girl.....I'm always here.....I never leave...watching...
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!

    Just like the candyman movie!
    So if I say your name in the mirror
    three times will you appear?
    But, not slice and dice
    Just nice to nice?
     
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    You don't have to say my name...I'm always here.....and I will never slice and dice....but I do other things....that will make it twice as nice.
     
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    MsB

    This is a piece of real OUCH! truth. Nice to read you as always. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart: