Black Poetry : Unabridged Dreams

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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unabridged Dreams
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    Have you ever woke up from a dream
    just as it was about to get good
    only to be left hanging

    wondering what dreams may come
    punctuated by compulsory
    occasional nightmares

    the world a frightful stage
    full of bit part players
    in an ongoing tragedy

    thwarted at every turn ~
    reciting lines that miss the mark
    dying to flip a poorly written script

    Bring on the second act…

    dreamers usher mankind toward
    the promised land of prophetic dreams
    unabridged to bring down a divided house


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought ~ overcome
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed I truly know what you talking about I had a few that left me wondering and speechless
    seeking answers and out comes .
     
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    from a dream its made feeling this
     
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    Brother Poet 1poetsought,

    Very nice. Forreal. Forreal.

    (smile)
     
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    Love this flow....the imagery you paint is vivid indeed!
     
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    On point in 2016 as well bro
     
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    Yes, i have. Only that they came to me like those daunting thoughts at day.

    Very reflective poem!
     
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    Al D We become that which we repeatedly do.. PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Ipoetsought; Have you ever woke up from a dream
    just as it was about to get good
    only to be left hanging

    Yes I have which says to me that I am not yet ready to receive that good and that I still have some work to do...I believe that when we are able to understand the meaning of our dreams we will unlock the mysteries in our lives.
     
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