Black Poetry : Unable

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Nov 7, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again
    I try to express
    My inner joy
    My happiness

    I sit and wonder
    About the wonder of you
    Not fully understanding
    Why I love you as I do

    To explain the unexplainable
    A lovely but impossible task
    So I sit and I smile
    So real my happy mask

    A writer of words I try to be
    Yet unable to write
    What your love means to me

    BE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BE......

    inside yo :heart: heart the beat of love
    say it all no need to lay it to canvas:D
     
  3. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So

    maybe it's the look you give her in the morning when her face is the first thing you see....

    maybe it's just some little thing you do for her....

    maybe it's in the way you hold her...

    maybe it's a million little things that lets her know how much you love her without really saying it in words...

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin one of these classic of yesteryears
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, some things truly are, beyond words. Such a clear expression of what many have experienced.
     
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    nice one

    like it


    people try xplain luv but i think no one can.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat, be able to withstand pangs of love

    I admire such courage, great work!
     
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