Black Poetry : un...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Twofish, Sep 22, 2002.

  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unclothed, unmasked
    these burdens of the past
    untouched, unscathed
    but somehow made me brave
    unhindered lust
    defined from lack of trust
    unattained Love
    unsent from realms above
    uncertain truth
    unlearned from time of youth
    uncompromising depth
    in the youth whom I protect
    unwise, unrestricted
    words, much too descriptive
    unwanted advances
    for unlucky second chances
    uncherished thoughts
    eternal in memory wrought
    uncovered treasures
    greater than one can measure
    unburdened existance
    which holds us at a distance
    untampered worth
    our value instilled at birth
    unknowing heads
    will pass by this and not have read...

    (feel free to continue on where I left off...)

    1luv
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the reality of life
    the messures of worth
    still in birth we give
    so another shell live
    through these eye
    a maze of compromise
    da faze of love
    contained from above
    a touched of passion
    wit da gentle notion
    da hour we flow in motion
    so i pass it on 2 u now 2
    continue dis list of life
    or is it a myth
    do u care for dis com'on
    not one beat skiped
    keep up da dip!
     
  3. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    come on wit it $$$RICH$$$...that's what I'm talkin bout!
    1luv
     
  4. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2fish.


    i am undoubtab-ly diggin' your
    unadulturated flow... so... i will
    Not even try to touch it!! :):):)

    but i will say... i loved it...
    unquestionab-ly. :D

    itsallLove, chile!

    elayne.
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    read 2!!!!!



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    ooooh! ....this is so worthy of our undivided attention... that we all might receive truth that propels us into the land of the 'knowing'.

    thank you for this, Sista Twofish!

    alyce
     
  7. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elayne & UbZoRbShUn - my sistas...I appreciate your kind words :) thank you both :)
    alyce - my sista...you touched my heart with your reply for you overstood the concept, thank you for all you've inspired in me, which is more than you know :)

    much LOVE and RESPECT
    -2fish
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey

    two where are ya these days???? Maybe we can hook up and hang out one day or something




    One
     
  9. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just email me gyrl and we'll go from there (I tryed to email you but can't)

    PEACE