Black Poetry : UN~BIDDEN ME.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Apr 23, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love seem to always
    creep in
    where ya heart can't
    de-fin
    unaware of sneaking
    sensitivity
    reframmin loyality
    through this love within
    of care
    the body yearn
    for this burnnin passion

    Quite unbidden senses
    flood
    endlessly a reminder
    calls
    with feelings which felt
    true
    two hearts mix becoming
    love
    compassion pose no
    fears
    and through joyful hope
    run tears

    unbidden have capture me
    in the spell of rapture in
    eternity
    the demands yo heart must
    heed
    in life of what mates surely
    need
    i twist and turn for answers
    an obligation mandates me
    this gifted bond yield
    through my soul of joy
    like an abandoning fields

    unbidden emotions flow
    gracefully to be received
    the greatest density that
    one solo language speaks
    unbiddenly

    I'll leave you alone for now !

    :insane:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY MY MY!!

    $$RICH$$, this is deep as heyull. But what really strikes me is how beautiful your flow is. I give you mad props, brothah, belee that.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems as though something has taken over you, perhaps it has even molded you. Just work through it like clay, it can be shaped into something manageable I'm sure. Genuinely flowed I feel ya here brotha.
     
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    awwww.. rich, :donttell: we wont tell.. your secret. Love as you see fit!
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Un-bidden Me

    Very Powerful. We can't control who we love . It is just something that happens.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz gempis for that happy u felt the motion

    thankz watz ya right surely it will be molded sweetly

    thankz manifesta for keepin it within the love is flowin

    thankz poetrymama surely we can't all we do is just love indeed

    y'all so wonderful thank u all for the visit and love on this piece .........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one of then thing hidden thankz everybody for the love and support on dis piece...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we cant control who we love if we could it be alot less hurt ppl in the world
    very nice and deep flow i could get with this....Angel
     
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    sho ya right sista i guess i was wondering out loud !
    thankz for the hit