Black Poetry : Ummmmmmm...Baby?...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummmmmmmm…baby?
    You gotta sit down
    Cuz I have some new for you
    Ummmmmmmm…baby?
    Now please don’t drown
    From the tears you may shed in this news
    Ummmmmmmm…baby?
    I don’t even know how to tell you this
    When you think I’m perfectly fine
    Ummmmmmmm…baby?
    My body is in remiss
    And the doctors, they think that I’m dying
    Ohhhhhhhh…baby?
    Don’t give me that look
    Its hard enough to keep from crying
    Please…baby?
    Don’t give me that look
    Your not the one who’ll be dying
    Ohhhhhhhh…baby?
    I can’t keep it in
    I need you so badly right now
    Awwwwww…baby?
    You have to keep it in
    Just give me a comforting smile

    Baby…?

    Baby…

    Talk to me baby…

    Without your strong heart I can’t survive
    And theres not even a reason for me to live
    Baby…
    you’re the only thing keeping me alive
    Because to you I have my life to give…

    Baby…?
    Answer me…

    Please…
     
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    whoa sweetie
    ur be just fine
    in my arms
    so divine

    O' sweetie
    how can dis be
    ur in my heart
    ever so sweet
    my love for u
    is unconditionally
    sit here let me confort thee

    whoa ! suga
    no need to weep
    for every tear
    my heart skips a beat

    let me caress all ya pain
    whisper softly ya lovin
    name

    yes babe ............
    in silent prayer
    sprinkle wit faith
    as the healing mircle
    take it's place
    so sweetie
    flash that beautiful
    smile on ya face
    let me kiss the myth away
    worry not i am strong
    i promise to never leave u
    alone
    i will be the comfort u need
    caress ya heart
    touch u right there

    shhhhhh!! honey .............
    don't say a word
    relax now
    my love is here
    feel it deep my dear
    my prayer bigger then hope
    my whisper to him
    better then da doc.
    hush now ....he'll fix it
    now sleep til morning
    i'll be right here beside u
    coz i love u ........

    feeling dis flow
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh baby...
    i just don't know what to do
    this type of thing i NEVER thought i'd go through
    but baby...
    but it is a good thing that your in my life
    to wipe every tear that falls with strife
    baby...
    in your arms i feel protected
    like the our strength keeps us connected
    baby...
    i always knew your love was so deep
    but i never knew the intensity
    oh baby...
    i can feel the skip of your heart beat
    as my body lays next your body
    baby...
    don't cry desperately for me
    as you my tears in your shirt, dampening
    baby...
    i love the way you hold me closely
    like you never want to let go of me
    and baby...
    i love the way you whisper my name
    its like time has freezed in a frame
    ohhh baby...
    ****....

    ummmmmmmmm i'm about to cry...i have to finish this later...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AAAWW MAN IM OVER HERE IN TEARS. IM SO SORRY THIS HAS TO HAPPEN, MAN I HOPE HE ANSWERS U. MAN... LET ME PRAY AGAIN.
     
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    i didn't mean to put u in tears girl...thanks the prayer...i need it...
     
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    ok , its a new day and i'm alive...so i can finish this rich...

    oh baby...
    a silent prayer is all i need to pull me through
    especially when the prayer is silently said with you
    baby...
    i hope the Lord blesses me
    with a gift of life granting
    baby..
    i wish i could smile, but its so **** hard
    and baby...
    i need you to smile, with the beauty of your art
    ohh baby...
    one simple kiss, melts away all my tears
    and one simple touch erases all my fears
    baby...
    i know you are strong and i rejoice
    in the fervor of your spirit of joy
    in the midst of such a suffering state
    in admittance of a suffering day
    baby...
    i....i.....
    ok i'll relax
    i just wish these tears would suddenly contract
    but your love for me will keep me strong
    its the only way i can go on....
    so baby...
    i'll lay here in your arms lovingly
    and alive i'll be here in the morning...hopefully...

    i love you...so much baby...
     
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    Very sad depiction.
    if this is true may God
    give you health and happiness
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this all written from experience...and its all sadly true...
     
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    Hearing you LovelyG ..feeling this flow
    Peace
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bluewater:)
     
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