Quiet Poetry Lounge : ummmm...needs a name

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 4, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it needs a name any ideals...i juat wrote didnt know where it would come out at...but if ya got any please tell me..and i give it a thought..thanks family..


    Here I go again
    Love is over due ..
    Promises promises…
    Always sunshine
    Then the clouds come
    And then the rain pours to
    Make the storm just right…
    A thrill of a life time….
    Sends chills
    down my spine..
    And freezes my heart
    Blinds my soul
    But here I go again..
    Spirit set free and alive…
    Don’t Betray me….
    Don’t give me
    cold shoulders
    and hurt me…see the
    pain never goes…
    But ya showed
    me how much
    You loved me….
    Now I need to show you
    My love for you
    Just hold on to me…

    Don’t let go..you are indeed
    What I want….look into my eyes….
    Feel me within…coz..
    you filled me with
    Happiness and gave me
    the joy to open up
    my heart to you
    see I waited for you
    and it’s the first time
    I felt a love so dayum true….
    And all I can do
    is write my thoughts
    That rambles
    in my mind…
    your love is magical
    your love is bittersweet
    listen to me as I begin to speak…
    a dash of hot sauce..
    with a lot of spice..lol
    your love shines like the sun
    the moon sings and the starz dance..
    your love…it drivin me crazy….
    Feel like I am in a maze..
    Hit in da head and
    placed in a daze….
    Now come sit in my Kingdom…
    Open ya eyez and unwine…
    Up above and feel
    A love so deep…I cant read ya…MIND
    Just bring yo…..home….come find out
    What it is all about…because baby
    I am your dream of perfect vision…….

    a blkangel thang...... :rolling:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope your perfect vision is realized. Sweet and endearing scribe.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin the scribe here not sure at this point of a title
    but i love the way this flow
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname ..oh its there...faith hope and believe and thy gift i shall recieve...

    $$RICH$$ its a honor i am glad ya like it..thank you now help me with a title soon...
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzBlk
    It would be hard to give this a name. It can't be contained in mere words. This is a brother mover. Soul shaking furor.

    " The storm just right…
    A thrill of a life time…. "
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankz hodee...glad ya likes....
    hope it was a brother mover...lol thanks fo da read and support...:angel1:
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice poem sis
    Peace
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks bluewater
    much love to u
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thans fo da read n support
     
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