Black Poetry : ===============UMMM OK? vs MADDRAPPER======(VOTE NO SLEEP)

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ===============UMMM OK? vs MADDRAPPER======(VOTE NO SLEEP)
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    UMMM OK?-----------------



    aye look

    I had to DROP THIS ****, to have you running like STOCKINGS *****//
    You think you good, but you thought wrong like an inaccurate HYPOTHESIS//
    When you asked to give me a BLOW JOB, you didnt COP IT, *****//
    Cuz you wrote under "Sex"... not attracted to the OPPOSITE//
    You get served and ****ed hot, like i put **** IN YO LADLE//(open ya mouth)
    I leave ya voice "HORSE" while im ROCKING THA STABLE//
    You rhymes don't produce energy, you need to be STOPPING YA FABLES///
    to me they short circuit like connections between negative and POSITIVE CABLES//
    You like a chance to win a free trip, we find you under the TOP//
    You see as much TOP, as STEVIE WONDER riding in DROPS//
    WONDER WHOSE HOT, check tha scale...ooh NOT YOU//
    I kno grandmas with arthritis dat kick flos harder then you in HOUSE SHOES//(floors=flow)
    Only reason you a MAD RAPPER, cuz kno one THINKS UR HOT//
    Since you in "J5" same skill level, Put yall in da same SENTENCE, GOD:::
    Attention: MADDRAPPER is the Hottest MC in da BIZNESS, "NAUGHT"(NOT)//(lol)
    Ya kno wat i think's fuqed up??? INDEPENDENT MOTHERS//
    BUT's wanna kno wats even more fuqed up, check ya SENTENCE STRUCTURE//
    Ya POETIC staments are LESS EFFECTIVE, den a COLLECTION of BLESSED catholics who INVEST IN SEXIST//

    stop da beat......
    (i mean come on, dont cathloics HAIL MARY?)
    beat come back on....

    You OBSSED WIT SEXING PETS KIDS, dats y you NEVA REGRETED, to be DIRECTED into being a PET DETECTIVE//



    MADDRAPPER



    Possess mess that’ll rip your chest I sugguest you duck
    These results or get struck in the flesh you’ll be a dead butt
    Maul and criticize your so call wise structure not rap culture
    Commercially stalk and verbally assault you causing rupture
    My source of satisfaction is to rip your course of action
    And force a fatal attraction to my rhymes even Toni Braxton
    Will kiss this, No doubt it’s legit to outwit this misfit
    I’ve become disgusted because your scum is rusted should
    Be dusted off never trusted your false background in the hood
    Whack clown that’s not good, attack your bounds with pine wood
    Try gain advantage but got slain by damage your brain is a sandwich
    So pass the hot sauce your slop is false Hip Hop is lost need a bandage
    Need to bleach your blend you’ve reached an end your speech tend
    To sway away everyday wanna preach but don’t know what to say amen
    Begun to fade in a dumb parade got your girl always cum when I get laid
    Play sherade with her **** hairs git in the front room or downstairs then serenade
    Like Queen Lativah mean with fever chop your spleen with a meat cleaver
    Wanna gnaw on my unique rhymes like a beaver was born in Geneva
    As luck would have it you ****ed like the silly rabbit on the Trixs cartoon
    You hold a grudge but your wheels roll in sludge style old like fudge
    Sold the judge a sad story in court the verdict you heard it, left your rep smudged
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    battle of the Mic yeah! dat's right
    hittings max poppin' wit wax to
    a smack down laying da hit to a fit
    da MADDRAPPER come through again
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maddrapper showstopper!!!!!!!!!

    Dayuuuuuuuuuum! You did it again...That is some serious existentialistic **** you to going on in here wrapped around political and social commentary ;The New Millenium "Gil Scott
    Herron" , fo real...keep spittin that positive flow!
    Blessings on Ya House!:toast:
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madd, you're a trip...I have never seen a battle posted before, this was good..."i got it" okay?
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, msluciousb AND redlady THANKS FOR RESPONDING YALL MADE MY DAY FOR REAL YO and redlady yes it's a battle HA!HA!
     
  6. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Wow"

    as mention also by real lady,
    I have never seen a battle mention period, and never on site,
    I am speechless

    Be blessed
    Queen
     
  7. Blkthunder

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    KEep it comin
    its a breath of fresh air
    from the usual
     
  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aqueenpassing AND Blkthunder THANKS FOR PEEPING THIS FOR REAL YO THIS IS A CHANGE FROM THE USUAL THANKS FOR REAPONDING DOE
     
  9. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    madd got this
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mind-soul thanks fo rthe vote and peeping this for real enjoyment of battling