Black Poetry : Um... I cannot even think of a title

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Nov 27, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was chillin next to my locker
    the spot where i usually watch her
    she was walkin to class
    while the dudes run behind her and offer
    to hold her books and the girls just talk ****
    and mock her
    she sends a smile in my direction
    while her style grabs my attention
    she's got asain eyes
    with a bronze penny complexion
    she comes up to me with a hint of affection
    ask for my number and we made a connection
    I walked her to class n she winked her eye
    I gave her a smile and I seen the guys
    jealously looking and wondering why
    I got to talk to her, sayin theyre not meanin to pry
    I asked her the same thing n she said
    she wanted me to make her happy n not bring her to cry
    She called me up and kept me up
    the sound of her soft voice, wet me up
    the way that she said it, messed me up
    knocked me over and now I cant get up
    Everyday that I see her
    makes me fantasize about the way I could please her
    Her slim waste and petite body makes me understand
    why these girls around here wanna be her
    She told me I was perfect, but I never witnessed a flaw
    Every curve is correct, even the size of her bra
    Her sex appeal is so dangerous
    that every sway should be against the law
    The things that she's told me
    lets me know that she only
    wants someone to see her for more than her beauty
    cuz these nights can get lonely
    Believe it or not
    she's got
    more intellect than most peeps woulda thought
    she's got dreams that peeps continually knock
    but she keeps pushing
    cuz her heart wont allow her to stop
    she said thats why she noticed me
    cuz she seen how focused i be
    when im doin my work or writin some poetry
    she could tell that I was goin somewhere
    so she watched me closely
    Now we're at a level that cant be defined.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this drop was sweet poet
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good lord this is tight, girl. how you make it rhyme so good?! ;) really likin this - you're on a roll today.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice and sweet...
    i enjoyed the read...
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my lovin it tyte scribe sistah
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful p.......i love it.....
     
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    ****snaps***

    It doesn't need a title it speaks for itself...

    beautiful expression of an unexpected connection...
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall

    im sorry that it took so long to respond. BTW you probably wont see me on here as much because its hoop season and i become the busiest person in the world. much love n respect..
     
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    Tyte drop.....I'm lovin this flow.........
     
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