Black Poetry : Ultimate Blaze within

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Looking deep inside my soul
    where today's living has it cold
    going heavy into da past
    where there's no return
    trying to cross bridges
    dat has been truely burned
    yet i rise from da dust of my yearn
    floating beyond da rivers turns
    going into my confussive mind
    eyez of pain tales of cryin
    watching from high and afar
    feeling da sparkle touch of da starz
    empowering wit hope raising da barz
    da ultimate colors standing large
    each one has it's place
    every soul need it's space
    where life's a eyeing trace
    deception / destruction / greed
    how da world can mislead
    dat has my streamline bleed
    da core of darken red

    Deep within tis world is a battle stage
    one dat keep us as people in rage
    one dat fingers control
    da one life's now hold
    whom has truely mold
    tis goes deep down to da soul
    leaves me very frosty cold
    as we struggle in survival
    some battle and retreat
    some lay down and accept defeat
    yet others fight to tis death
    won't give in never rest
    till they have nothing left
    so People we must stay in it / on it
    and never accept what they offer
    but make a stand and deliver
    be the victor da strong winner

    Racism !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a blaze within that those who have never been through it, just can't understand. Your words were penetrating poet.
     
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    sometime i wonders what if factor !
    thankz sis fo da read....................
     
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    yes poet feeling your strength here

    i liked this part

    keep marching poet

    there's only one direction

    straight ahead

    it will be defeated one day
     
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    Da march is long draining and hard but my life is dedicated to da cause
    thankz a million for feeling me here ........
     
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    Excellent Write!


    Much Luv
     
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    one dat must be known ...thank u sweetie
     
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