Black Poetry : " uh oh "

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Dec 19, 2006.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .... took her out
    made her laugh
    made her love
    made her live
    looked in her eyes
    spoke her poetry....
    she listened adamantly
    read the words on my naked eyes passionately...
    her naked eyes
    made me desire
    made me dare
    made me die...
    i....
    once took this dime to her dorm
    made her nice and warm
    undressed her
    carressed her
    sexed her
    and called her by my ex-girl's name
    right after i brought the storm...

    uh ohhhhh
     
  2. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice rythm

    peace

    patrice
     
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    And we can all collectively say, "Oops, did I do that?" Great write about putting that foot so far up your mouh, there's no way to gently pull it out. Wow...
     
  4. moham

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    lol...you naughty boy!
    next time keep quiet ok...lol.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now ......ya right uh oh ! shhhhhhhhh.........
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To tha point! Long time no read. Good reading ur words again!

    N2
     
  7. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one