Black Poetry : u want me don't you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, Mar 29, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can tell

    you want me don't you?
    i see the way you watch my body move across the room,
    i hear you askin your friends, yo where cutey get that *** from.
    as your eyes stare up and down my spine watchin my body grind to the hip hop beat.
    i make you tingle all the way down to your feet.
    you want me don't you?
    i can almost feel your hands caress my curves,
    and your lips caress my swurves.
    i can tell by the way you speak to me with a voice so deep,
    my spine vibrates.
    u got that i want you look in your eye,
    like in your mind your sayin" **** gurl your fine"

    you want me don't you? you ain't got to lie!!!!!!!!!!
    i can tell:heart: yeah i'm fine
    5'3
    nice teeth
    skin, cocoa butter cream
    body sweet
    yeah you feelin me!:heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
  2. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah im feelin it!

    sean.feeling
     
  3. Moses the Poet

    Moses the Poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this. If it was a scene from a movie I would see it as having no words spoken, except soft deep voiced ones in your ear.

    It's all about "that look"..... and anyway, how can we not watch!:cool:

    Andrew
     
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    i'm feelin it too! and yeah i do want you! you read my mind :wink:
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is cute, i likes a lot
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cute piece.
    Guys are so easy to read and "that look" is such a turn on.
    you go girl.

    *Emma*
     
  7. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very cute.
     
  8. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    the title caught me

    it reminds me of steve urkel from family matters

    you want me don't you :lol:

    this was nice :)

    one

    pd

    :heart:
     
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    poeticwordstris- yeah, I want you girl... (Nice Work!)

    You know I do
    Needs to get wit you
    In a poem we do

    1poetsought ~
     
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