Black Poetry : U TURN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Intrepid, Jan 16, 2005.

  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'd like to make a U TURN
    Make this U TURN and follow my heart not my mind
    Make this U TURN so that what we had will not vanish
    Make that U TURN and let you trust me, hold me, adore and love me
    Make this U TURN and comfort and hold you when your scared or need to cry.
    Listen if you just need to let it all hang out.
    Let me make this U TURN so I can
    Forever trust you
    Always encourage you and your dreams
    Love you unconditionally forever
    Let me make this U TURN
    GOD did
    Will you?​
     
  2. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked how u ended that...it got deep.even tho sometimes we deserve second chances... other times its not good to back slide... hope that u-turn is for the best... thansk for da drop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!

    wow ! this was awesome and the way u displayed it

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love /peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    tyte drop poet welcome to the family ! :number1:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  4. gempis

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    Most def vibin your poem, and understand where you're comin from. Welcome aboard! Keep postin, cause I wanna read some mo from ya. :hi:
     
  5. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for welcoming to this wonderful site
    and your words of encouragement and praise
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with daroc, that ending made me say umph!!! If this was said to me, it would definitely make me think twice. Flow on, this was on point.
     
  7. SoothinDivinity

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    Greatness

    I was readin this and thought to myself...."Wow this is straight from my own mind". I was feelin this flow from the beginning til the very end. Keep doin you thang.
     
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    Make that U-turn & go the right way.

    Diggin' this one.

    Peace.
     
  9. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop poet, i enjoyed the read and the message

    Lyr1c
     
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    smooooooooth...
    drop sum mo poet....
    one love
    khasm
     
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