Black Poetry : U~r

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 3, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U are my sunshine
    the light of my heart

    if lovin u was a crime
    i'll be jailed many many
    tyme like now

    if i was blind
    truely i still would see
    yo beauty in a vision

    from da tears of crying
    i would weep


    my heart would be dying
    to comfort u
    in my arm u can rest

    U ~ R
    what every man lone for
    and every woman wish to be
    ya essence of beauty is
    truely felt

    not once will i let u be
    coz i be lovin thee
    ya whispers so soft
    i listen
    intently
    with
    a
    vision
    of
    love
    U
    R
    my queen to be
    will u come to me
    can u see my
    affection
    do you need
    any
    direction to my heart
    i am to ya body
    a protectional cover
    U
    R
    to me all dat a woman should
    be
    i really wish u can see
    i've watch u
    felt yo wordz
    i've heard u
    see
    U~R
    her
    the desires of my destiny in a dynasty
    of
    love
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful flow ...

    And yet I gotta know.....

    Does she feel the same way?...

    If not, you can swing my way :D

    That was so lame :D but I did like this flow Rich. Priceless
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    How beautiful! The love just poured into this here
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz SwtT........u made ya point i know u hear my heart speak

    purple........when it rain love it truely do pours out Thankz sis.
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You ain't never lie. I heard your heart speaking loud and clear.

    "what every woman wish to be"
    rattled my bones with that one right there.

    Do you have a younger brother? :laughs:
     
  6. omoboladapoet

    omoboladapoet Member MEMBER

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    my queen to be
    will u come to me
    can u see my
    affection
    do you need
    any
    direction to my heart
    i am to ya body
    a protectional cover


    deep stuff right thurr!!! i am to ur body a protectional cover.......after these words brotha u better never let that queen down......ur words in this flow is like a protectional cover to all women
    tyteness
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum i wish i had someone that can say that to me. u always have the right words and right vision. tyte flow...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, $$RICH$$, that is so sweet and pretty. You have a heart of gold, you know.
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich, :wave:

    Very beautiful piece!! :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, and U~r a phenomenal poet!
    Loving your work here.

    Peace,
    Angelic