Black Poetry : U Pleasure Me...I'll Pleasure U...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Mar 17, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pleasure me
    ill pleasure you
    don't envy me
    you know its true
    i take you up
    won't let you down
    i let you come
    and scream out loud
    now everything
    you wanna do
    to make fantasy's
    come so true
    your love in me
    my love on you
    just pleasure me
    and i'll pleasure you
    so what's is pleasure?
    thats what you say
    it makes the darkness
    fade into day
    the vibe is erotic and
    i'll pleasure you
    glistening bodies at hand
    you'll pleasure me too
    ill pleasure you
    you'll make me scream
    so what's ya pleasure?
    i think we need some whipped cream....
     
  2. GYMEFORTE

    GYMEFORTE Active Member MEMBER

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    it made me go back in my own memory banks...and smile
    much love.
    GYMEFORTE
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot over here i see
    nice peppery drop
    welcome home....
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for ur comments...glad u liked it...
     
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    Sweet and spicy vibe, the ending made me smile.
     
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    That also made me smile i loved the flow very nice......:)
     
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    wassup sista :) This was LOVELY :) as usual :)
     
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