Black Poetry : u-n-i verse....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Jun 12, 2001.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetry in eternity's orbit
    when you and i verse
    forming spiritual constellations in the space of divine confinement
    where our hearts are gravitating
    creating a perfect alignment
    to the stars than the pyramids as they behold our symmetry..

    as you and i verse
    traveling through mind
    and
    navigating time by rhime to collide head on..
    eyes on..
    hands on..
    to finally land on/in your earth making birth of every verse
    as i begin to make nfinite love to you

    as u-n-i verse.....
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah~

    Back with a sensational flow ~ from the Milky Way! :)

    I thought you were MIA ?!-- :lol:
    but now I know you were
    somewhere out there
    creating this
    "u-n-i verse", which is tight!!

    Oneluv.
     
  3. Thandiwe

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    nice piece

    I can definitely feel the u and i in verse. (well not you and i, per se) but how wonderfully cosmic when two "heavenly" bodies come together. :)
     
  4. Bishop

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    Excellent Exploration of the Universe.....
     
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    If I could...

    ...get into your brain for half a second, you think I could reach your level, and spit out a joint as hot as this one??? :D :D :D :D :D
    *nfinitely, feelin' this piece...*
     
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    j'hiah

    this U and I versal 'peace' is tight!! :cool:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JH

    so good to read your flow again! And as always, you bring it!

    Thank you for this beauty!

    a
     
  8. poeticdelight

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    hey jehiah

    now i understand what thoughts come to mind LOL

    red passion alize
     
  9. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Truly

    feelin this peice.

    On some new level that I may one day hope to reach.

    one day:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    OUR MINDS

    MAKING LOVE TO EVERY WRITTEN WORD
    INNER THOUGHTS OF THE WHOLE WORLD
    IN YO HANDS.......................I FEEL U AS U FEEL ME
    I SEE AND KNOW WHAT U KNOW
    WOW!! U FLOW ON
     
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