Black Poetry : u makin me hate u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Aug 26, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i have tried
    so hard
    to be within reason
    and
    request that we speak
    talk things over
    to comfort the treason

    and u have
    said that we would
    then u disappear
    no call nuthin at all
    and again, i wipe tears

    and i love u
    but i won't tell u
    cause u don't need to know
    suppose i'd change my mind
    if only your face would show

    u said words
    i've tried to forget
    but u won't say ur sorry
    so unapolegetic
    and i can't handle it

    i feel like my feet
    have been kicked
    from under me
    and the water from the ocean
    has drowned my security

    an u makin me hate u
    because u keep lying
    and i keep trying
    to keep from
    dying.
     
  2. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, quit tryin
    he ain't neva gonna stop lyin
    you know deep in your heart
    goodbye is your best start

    I've been there before
    its not you who's the whore
    he make you feel like a queen
    when he's on the scene

    the minute he leaves
    you know you believe
    hes with another
    not spendin time with his brothas

    is it worth all this doubt
    knowing your going without
    all of the things you deserve
    boy, his *** gotta a lota nerve

    leaving you waiting by the phone
    three mights in a row alone
    when you make plans to go out
    he starts to doubt and shout

    he ain't making u hate him
    but you know the chances are slim
    if you told him he'd care
    to your own heart be fair

    let him know how you feel
    that what you feel is real
    and then tell him goodbye
    cuz you know all he's gonna do is lie
     
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    wow
    deep very deep
    release it
    let it go
    deep flow
    Peace
     
  4. triniti424

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    I TOTALLY understand where ya comin from on this one sista...and the addon from Randee...pain was meant to be learned from...release and renew my sista :)
     
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    he thinks he
    holds the cards
    but he doesn't cuz
    he needs my love
    i don't need to love him
    and he will know
    when the words, don't flow
    or they do
    and i say
    good bye.....:kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  6. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you got it now
     
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    dang gurl, i loved this one flow on sista,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa!!!!!!!!!
    i feel ya and this so heart felt
    do what u must
     
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