Black Poetry : U Love Me?? R U Sure??

PositiveMindset

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The many times U say U love me,
R U sure U know what U mean?
Do U love the fact that I talk 2 your mind?
Tweak your intellect with well-placed rhymes
that speak of times passed & 2 come?
Soothing numb synapses that get the thought patterns snappin'...
Or do U love the idea that with me chivalry's alive & crackin'?
My actions are proof of the truth behind my words.
Open doors, offer seats, in my life, it's Queens 1st.

Maybe it's how I please your body out & inside...
Puttin' my back behind the slow wind & grind
that makes U climb 2 elevated heights.
Do U still love me when we fight?
Do U love the me that has 2 be right?
What about the me that gets in those ill moods,
when I just don't want 2 be spoken 2?
It's not U, it's just my assitude.

Don't forget about the me that's crass & rude.
Who laughs at dudes that busts their sh!ts on concrete...
If it wasn't funny, it wouldn't be on T.V..
Or the me who abhors homosexuality.
No, I'm not homophobic, just don't bring it around me.
So what U like men, I don't need 2 know...
I like women, but I don't make my life a public freak show.
Then there's the me who's insecure...
It's been past experience 2 give my heart 2 women before
just 2 have it violently torn & devoured.
So now I cower at the thought of it happening again.
That's the me who doesn't want U having male friends.

That's me in a nutshell.
Do I have your love still?
Can U love all of the me that makes me a whole?
The several me that completes the mind, body, & soul?

Can U?

U do??

R U sure???
 
There are times I say I love you
But do you feel the weight behind the words
Do you notice my hands nervousness immediately afterward
The shallow wisp & swallows of my inconsistent breath…
Do you hear the rapid soul waves that tidal & crest
Until I say the words…feeling the strength in your chest
But I need for you to be sure…
You understand what I mean
And know that my love reaches beyond actions & deeds
…it’s rooted and grounded in the sowing of your seeds
…such as the way your intellect allures my mind to come out & play
Hours of challenging verbosity in poetic displays
Or your polarity in mood & occasional need for space
Everything about your man makes for a colorful array…
And each element that is you…I respect & embrace
Could it be the way you touch me on the inside
Or maybe out…either way
Love was a stranger to me…until I saw your face
But there are times I say I love you…
And I’m unsure that you hear…the weight behind the words
And how deep into you…I am endeared
For everything you desire…I will adhere
And that is the message…I hope you hear
When I say that I love you…and that’s it
In a nutshell…but to answer your final questions

Yes…

I do…

And I’m totally sure





Very nice scribe Brother Positive!
 

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