Black Poetry : U Love Me?? R U Sure??

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The many times U say U love me,
    R U sure U know what U mean?
    Do U love the fact that I talk 2 your mind?
    Tweak your intellect with well-placed rhymes
    that speak of times passed & 2 come?
    Soothing numb synapses that get the thought patterns snappin'...
    Or do U love the idea that with me chivalry's alive & crackin'?
    My actions are proof of the truth behind my words.
    Open doors, offer seats, in my life, it's Queens 1st.

    Maybe it's how I please your body out & inside...
    Puttin' my back behind the slow wind & grind
    that makes U climb 2 elevated heights.
    Do U still love me when we fight?
    Do U love the me that has 2 be right?
    What about the me that gets in those ill moods,
    when I just don't want 2 be spoken 2?
    It's not U, it's just my assitude.

    Don't forget about the me that's crass & rude.
    Who laughs at dudes that busts their sh!ts on concrete...
    If it wasn't funny, it wouldn't be on T.V..
    Or the me who abhors homosexuality.
    No, I'm not homophobic, just don't bring it around me.
    So what U like men, I don't need 2 know...
    I like women, but I don't make my life a public freak show.
    Then there's the me who's insecure...
    It's been past experience 2 give my heart 2 women before
    just 2 have it violently torn & devoured.
    So now I cower at the thought of it happening again.
    That's the me who doesn't want U having male friends.

    That's me in a nutshell.
    Do I have your love still?
    Can U love all of the me that makes me a whole?
    The several me that completes the mind, body, & soul?

    Can U?

    U do??

    R U sure???
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...this feels so true and real..and so well posed....If you love someone, you love them inside out, upside down, every which way...lovin this one...
     
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    i likes this Mindset.....
    love can be a wonderful thang...
    love that person whole...
    the bad and good comes as well
     
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    There are times I say I love you
    But do you feel the weight behind the words
    Do you notice my hands nervousness immediately afterward
    The shallow wisp & swallows of my inconsistent breath…
    Do you hear the rapid soul waves that tidal & crest
    Until I say the words…feeling the strength in your chest
    But I need for you to be sure…
    You understand what I mean
    And know that my love reaches beyond actions & deeds
    …it’s rooted and grounded in the sowing of your seeds
    …such as the way your intellect allures my mind to come out & play
    Hours of challenging verbosity in poetic displays
    Or your polarity in mood & occasional need for space
    Everything about your man makes for a colorful array…
    And each element that is you…I respect & embrace
    Could it be the way you touch me on the inside
    Or maybe out…either way
    Love was a stranger to me…until I saw your face
    But there are times I say I love you…
    And I’m unsure that you hear…the weight behind the words
    And how deep into you…I am endeared
    For everything you desire…I will adhere
    And that is the message…I hope you hear
    When I say that I love you…and that’s it
    In a nutshell…but to answer your final questions

    Yes…

    I do…

    And I’m totally sure





    Very nice scribe Brother Positive!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was off da hook ......question is are u sure !!!
    wow
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname, and that's the truth. Thank U 4 the feel.

    mzblk, sometime it's hard 2 love the deep, dark, dirty part of someone, but if U can, that is love at it's best.

    angelic, that in itself leaves no doubt.
    Very lovely add, my sister, so full of feel & love.
    I so love your mind, & I'm sure.
    Thank U 4 the read.

    $$, that's the real. Tell 'em 2 take a minute or 2 before U tell me that, cuz love is deep, & mine is bottomless. Thank U 4 the feel.
     
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    Beautifully Written

    Yes I love you
    You must understand
    It is not just the love you give to any regular man
    I love the you that will bust a head on the concrete
    I love the you that wishes people would keep their business discreet
    I love the you that gives me a chance to prove that I am true
    I love the wonderful ways that you do you
    I will not do those things that have been done to your heart before
    I can shelter you forever as long as you don't let your trust exit the door
    I am a strong woman that knows she needs a king at her side
    And as long as you treat me respectfully, I will do everything you desire
    Do not feel threatened by other men in company
    I make sure the have no intentions to question your authority
    I give you dominion over my whole heart
    When I say I love you, i include what I've learned since the start
    Yes I love you. I am sure.

    Tight piece!!!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    open communication from the beginning...
    1 of the keys to a good relationship.

    nice write!

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    my brotha I believe that any Queen would be elated to LOVE you WHOLE
    because you are the WHOLE package...
    I know that our family would be blessed to hear u read this in voice chat.
    whaddya say king PositiveMindset
    will u grace us with your presence :)
     
  10. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eternal, my love is deeper than a bottomless pit...
    When my heart is given 2 someone, all I do is repect.
    Cuz I feel blessed 2 receive their heart in return
    but hesitantly do I fall cuz I have the fear I'll be burned.
    And it's not that I wouldn't trust U with friends of the male specimen,
    it's just that I know that dudes try 2 get 2 close when U let them in...
    Cuz I did it when I was younger...
    Some relations that God made, I tore asunder.
    So now I take things slow...
    Before I fall 4 someone, I wanna know
    if they're sure.

    Thanks 4 the feel, my sister.

    coco, that's the triple truth. If U let them know what the deal is from the gate, there's not much room left 4 mistakes. Thank U 4 the read.


    Sister triniti, your words are pleasing 2 the soul, thank U much.
    I think I may just have 2 slip by 1 time, see what the dealy.
     
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