Black Poetry : "u love drama" ( a joyce/jh piece)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Aug 15, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :argue:.... ****, why are you alwayz bytchin' and complainin!!
    why haven't i looked for a job?! hell, it's rainin'
    look don't worry about me worry about all o' dat weight you gainin'
    mannn
    i use to love that trim *** you're still fine but here, try this slim fast aight...
    oh yeah and if you~ heeaarr any nooyze~ right
    it's boyz night
    hey while you're in the kitchen pass me a coors light... :smokin:
    we're watchin' the big fight iz that tyte with you?!
    girl, don't worry
    i'll cover the pay-per-view
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop:Joyce shaking her head...she wanted J'hiah to send her the poem first so that she could make a discision on whether to collab or not.)

    :idea: J'hiah...I would love to collab wit cha on dis. However, there's jes' one lil thang...I will PM you on dis rat away. Ifn you still wanna do dis under those conditions...then I will be glad (real glad) to oblige you dear. I warn you, your vocabulary will be challenged, because the use of some fillers will not be acceptable. But ifn yo vocabulary is average, you should be in good shape.

    Yo poetic twin...Joyce :lol: That was a funny poem tho, but I just can't go there from my position.

    :court: Joyce on J'hiah's head!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya off da hook wit da cover charges........tyght
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    Joyce

    you will have to excuse him i'm sure he's trying to
    develop a burst of creative energy for the play
    he is writing

    :rolleyes:

    that's going to be one hell of a script :lol:

    pd :eek:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha ha ha

    j you know you sounded like my upstairs neighbor ...






    One
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sounds like some folks I once knew... very well. Enjoyed this, much.

    Bert
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my peeps,


    A poet is able to write what he sees through/by whom he sees it at face value with the reality that is (in the hope to draw a moral and defining conclusion).
    this character in this piece really exists.

    ...Poets are nature's, emotion's, and time's biggest observers and so receptive to them all that we allow them to speak through us in 1st, 2nd, or 3rd person forms.
    The waters inspire. The mate provokes. Time uses us and we use time.

    ...
    Poets are vicarious creatures. We are vicarious creatures with God given abilities to pierce through the souls of people, places and things and write their experiences.

    i became this character in this piece though i am not this character.
    i believe there are women poetesses and guests here that experience this.
    i would have love to see Joyce set his record str8, but i have understood her case here.
    The ending of this character would have been in his shame and destruction.

    For many to understand where you are coming from and where you are trying to go, sometimes we just have to keep it real, say it real and add no sugar or salt, but make it plain.


    Joyce,
    sorry queen, i gots to keep it real and that even means respecting your position. i don't want any more knots on my head already with your hammer :D
    i should've cybercated ( yeah cybercated) a little better with you on this , my badd.

    $$RICH$$,
    thanx peep..

    pd,
    :lol: that play is almost finished by the way.
    called 'when a man is broken' like this man in this piece was about to be.
    thanx.

    Ubzorbshun,
    thanx for readin' queen.

    this piece is done.
     
  8. epiphany

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    J'hiah,
    I know what I would do...:D.

    I love your explanation of
    the nature of a poet...beautiful.
    you are such a "wise ol' soul"

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Joyce,
    I also understand your point of
    view comin from a Christian perspective.
    Its refreshing to witness...

    oh, J'hiah...cybercated...now thats good,
    that need to go in Websters...:lol:

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

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    extraextralarge cranium.


    mmm mmm mmm! you just know you oughtz ta stop!! :lol:

    you're so cute sometimes... then you turn right around
    & act like you got some sense!! that's why i dig you! :D

    itsallLove, chile! (Nfinite-ly!)

    elayne.
     
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