in your other poem, the first stanza wrapped me up
and in this one...the last stanza tied me..
these two poems i read of yours today are
really wonderful..
either i've missed something or the creative energies you are riding on have taken you to another, higher place..
very nice
I suppose what struck me the most about this one, was what was particularly captured in the last stanza...all of these feelings are held, yet there is the total uncertainty of it all. Flow on, that pen of your is smokin.
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