Black Poetry : U Fu**** Up!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LADIES...TELL ME THIS
    WHAT KIND OF A MAN WANTS A JUMPDOWN FOR A WIFE?
    WHAT IS HE THINKING WHEN HE LEAVES THE ONLY REAL WOMAN TO EVER WALK INTO HIS LIFE?

    Baby, this one's for you...
    Can't even look in your eyes and call you my boo
    **** it! Time to press on and start life a new
    Cause I see that you and me together ain't the thing to do
    Not long ago we were talkin bout marriage
    What happened to the n**** that would ride "Horse and Carrige"
    You said you wanted me to carry your baby
    But while I'm carrying your child, you make a jumpdown your lady
    Did you leave because I couldn't shake my ***
    Or cause when times got hard, I didn't **** for cash
    If that's the case you've now got all that you need
    But it's a shame a whore is where you now plant your seeds
    Don't you know makin "a hoe a housewife" ain't the thing to do?
    I'm a buy you the CD...I'm worried bout you
    It's funny cause the man I knew had so much game
    Guess yours don't recognize hers and that's a **** shame
    You can't see she don't give a **** about you
    Just another name on her list of n***as to screw
    I guess I'm not the only one that has to learn the hard way
    But I'm done playin dumb...I give up and let go...starting today!
    I've made up my mind, ain't **** you can say
    I'm lockin my own heart. You're no longer worth the pain
    You're scandelous and crazy, hopeless and lazy
    All I can say is you ****ed up wit a REAL LADY!
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i heard this boo!!
    Tell it like it is!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:...aww sweetie I am SO SOOORRRY that he did you like this....But when the pain passses...theres always a new day: ) :) :) :) :) Keep smiling sweetie Things will get better
     
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    one sometime don't really see
    true love at self feet
    but once the well become dry
    that's when u see da tears of his eye

    ya time to take flyte
    time to fly the lovin sky
    to a romance so new
    a pure love awaiting u

    coz it's time to press on
    leave his butt alone
    ya inner soul has realized
    he's all washed up in
    a mask .......let it all out !!!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** girl!! u let go on this one!!! tell him!!
     
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    OK alize, I truly truly feel you on this. He dunno what he missed. He really dunno. Been there.
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Alize,

    Oh sweetie, this breaks my heart. I feel for you. Everything will get better in time. I know cause I have been there. It is his loss!!

    Keep your head held high, girl!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    sucka missed out on da real, loser! i feel u girl !:toast: :toast: :toast:
     
  9. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow sis, he will realize his mistake
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You guys have me crying over here. Thankyou so so much for the comments. I don't know what I would do if I wouldn't have found Destee's pages.

    Much love to everyone in the family!