Black Poetry : U didn't know?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Feb 17, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok
    Ok
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    Just listen 4 a min...ok?

    Being that I am who I am and I do what I do It never means that I will ever want to loose U!
    or any memory that we have shared old or new.
    You have become the keys of my pianno of life
    much more than some life paretner wife
    So ease up with the questions of the what and why's
    Slow down with the who's and where's with angered eyes
    Stop being that emotional smurf and surf your own brain for what is true
    U know me 100% there is nothing chainging or nothing new.
    I'm still that Gemini but u know both sides
    I'm still the Heat bringer but u know u my only ride
    I'm still the same man u loved till sunrise
    So why do u have to question everything when u already have everything inside?

    I'm Just A Man!

    I stand here as a man
    not a superhero,
    a fantasy,
    but as a man!

    I stand here before you not to be judged by what others have done,
    I'm not the one that made u hurt and had your tears run.

    I'm not the one who played the games and had your head aspun
    I'm just a man who stayed when others would run.

    yes my name may entice you and have u thinking devilish thoughts,
    But a name is just a name.....
    because it's the path that the man walks.
    that really counts when the day is over and the sun has set low
    It's me...
    It's me...
    All this you shoul know!

    Heavy hearted and confused u look into my eyes
    Puzzled and Lost u shall be until u realize.

    My love is in yours soaked dep down into your pore's
    I can only speak it and show it
    but until u accept it it makes no difference how I bestow it.
    As friend
    As lover
    As teacher
    As Poet?

    He11 I even used my green thumb to plant it and grow it.
    I even used a needle and thread like a seamstress to sow it.

    When we hug my heart beats out morris codes so u could feel my life
    "U changed my whole world around", just listen to Barry white!

    ~caramelpython~
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely this dip deep into her heart
    what a flow brutha love this here man

    (being a MAN about it )
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$RICH$$ .... All we can do is be A man about things in the end! :teach:
     
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    nicely done....
    indeed all you can be is A man
    flow on tight scribe
    my brother
    Angel
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :shades: Thanks angel..... :eek:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you explained this, intentions should be clear as crystal, but they aren't somehow.
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow is nice as always man. I like this one.
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: If my intentions are not clear then I will just to :court: it into her...LOL *wink* :lol:
     
  9. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Well say tha Dayum thang den...."

    A Tyte' Talented & to da Point LoviN Flow...

    I Feelz dis hurr Poem
    Write On!
     
  10. Khasm13

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    this was a man's man poem
    and it was mos def on point
    nice perspective man
    one love
    khasm
     
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