Quiet Poetry Lounge : U can't compare

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Aug 31, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a hurricane is
    to a gentle breeze
    like apples and oranges
    from two different trees
    there's no comparison
    mabaline doesn't bottle class
    and natural beauty
    doesn't dangle from
    department store racks
    obstructing my vision
    squandering my time
    when you see my ladies panties
    still fresh in my pocket
    and her scent fresh on my lips
    and her kiss still fresh on my mind
    respect that.......and backtrack
    and figure out
    where you dropped your self respect
    no...I'm not in check
    but I am in love
    and she's thought highly of
    now...what about you?
    I wouldn't have to be rude
    if............
    you understood "no"
    and allowed yourself to grow
    into a real woman
    and not a J-Lo carbon copy
    identity...straight from MTV
    or maybe it's BET
    either way it's not for me
    try individuality
    hang that around your neck
    paint that on your nails
    and stitch that on the backside
    of your jeans
    while I make love to a woman
    illuminating like the sun
    lip gloss and go
    tugging on all-natural locs
    while she moans :smokin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man dis was phat and off da hook
    u know theirs no compare like a flip flop !
    u keep speaking i'm listening
     
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    Ahhhhh! Smoothly laid!!!!
    Thats right! Love your
    lady only!!!!
    Beautiful women are
    a dime a dozen. But
    that one true love
    only comes once!!!!

    Keep on dropping 'em!!!

    Still loving it!!!!!!!! :luvv:
     
  4. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$RICH$$ and PurpleMoons....glad you enjoyed. Thanks for taking the time to reply..... :luvv: :roll: Much love to both of you always.
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some men are blinded by hose J-Lo copies instead of taking the time to love the original, unduplicated. This was a breath of fresh air.....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I'm loving this. The bottom line is respect, respect the one you're with, and respect what belongs to the heart of another. Flow on brotha.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    kente...this was done so well...separating the real from the artificial...
    loved how it began "like a hurricane is to a little breeze" and I was there..never straying from your creative energy...made me smile, think,
    see...
    verrrry nice...
     
  8. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you guys. I'm glad that there are real, naturally beautiful women still in existance. It's not all about looks either. Some women have artificial minds too. Can't think outside of what television tells them is important. Did that come out right? Anyways, I love women that are different and just plain themselves. Too many clones running around nowadays.
    Starting to look like "I Robot" here on Earth.
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww, Brother Kente!!! I am officially loving you right now! This was tight. Written with conviction and purpose.

    Jazzy :luvv:
     
  10. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Officially loving me right now huh? Thanks jazzy. Now you've caught up to me because I've been loving you for a while now.
    Thanks for the reply. :devil:
     
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