Black Poetry : U Can Name It...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jul 25, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve been watching you from a distance
    And as god as my witness
    I’ve never seen anyone as beautiful as you

    I don’t mean to come on strong
    Or say something wrong
    But it seems that the feelings are mutual too

    This is like the third time I seen you
    Your smile is delightful and your walk is mean too
    I was wondering if you’re interested in going somewhere to talk…

    I’m not trying to spit any lines
    Or commit any crimes
    If you’re not interested, I can understand if you walk…

    I see that your friends are here with you
    And they probably are wondering where you disappeared to
    If you don’t want to leave them, they can come with us to hang out

    The 1st two times I let you pass on by
    But I figure its fate since we’re here tonite
    If not tonight, you can give me your number and I’ll figure something out

    Don’t worry about me trying something slick
    I’d rather wait than take the risk
    I can have you home as soon as you’d like

    I just want to live in the moment
    Why not use the time since we own it
    I just figured I’d ask because the mood is right

    I can tell that you’re single
    And you like to mingle
    But you also wouldn’t mind if love came knocking on your door tonight

    I know that you’re young
    And you’re into having fun
    But we both know there is more to life

    I’m not trying to rush you, but the time is tickin
    This place is dead and I know some places that are hittin
    Either way I’m finding somewhere else to go

    By the way, my name is Keesha
    Nice to meet ya
    So you rolling with me or no?
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The making of great love this is excellent
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang, that flows more smoothly than water, sweetie. Muy, muy tight.
     
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    silky jus silky :)
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u yall...
     
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    Dannnnng, you put it down on this one. That was smooth and I'm truly feelin it. I loved it. It was tyte and it touched my heart.

    Much Love,
    Foxy........................
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thanks fox....
     
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    I loved this :heart:
     
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