Quiet Poetry Lounge : U ARE , it's u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 6, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I notice ya heart long ago
    the way u speak only true
    love will know of this
    i've temp to dive but driven
    into ya essence of beauty
    ur now my loveth mate
    u are my spice my flava
    ur my depth and storm
    the mix of my direction
    the sweet soul affection
    it's your compassion that
    kept me arised on path
    those miles we spent wasn't
    wasted but set aside to
    allow our true faith of love
    u dance in my radiant bliss
    i've kiss ya mental twist
    a captivity of rapture we made
    set off a fire ball blaze
    still spinning off ya shyness
    yet nassy for my delight
    and inside dis spinnerster
    the core is divine ya my
    Queeneth be not ashame
    but rejoice for GOD has given
    us this secret place to venture
    and limbo da depth of reasons
    we seek not for thy loveth is
    and will be even after we go
    apath embracing da day & night
    my dreameth is of u more then u
    know and my beckon calling for u
    i stumble yet u not mumble
    i've fallen yet u come to pick
    me up again so i knoweth ya love
    is real , true and humble it u
    as this ink runs it spells ya name
    in motion so much i can say
    yet words can't do justice for
    your solo love and heart
    but allow me to say i loveth u
    from the start and today i see
    no end to our core
    allow me to shower u and
    express my love given me
    this tyme to share my all upon
    the journey we take and do just
    and comfort ya thoughts , praise
    ya love ur an Goddess in my eyez
    heart and soul
    share my world forever will u
    it u all of u and i am of u as u
    so now i rest at the helm of ya
    love and weep not in sorrow
    but leak a tear for dis love
    it 's u i tell ya
    U are .....................................


    A Dyanondluv Nuwave production
    2005 all Rights Reserved $R
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U are my dear
    it is u
    no matter what
    mere humans do
    God has a plan
    for everyone
    and it's not to be denied
    until His will be done
    So insecurities are calmed
    and the fallen helped to rise
    20/20 vision sees much, but
    the third eye is even more wise
    there was a draw, a magnet,
    something there from the start
    couldn't exactly put my finger
    on it, but you captured my heart
    words can't quite do the feelings
    justice, as tears well up inside
    pride exists, and shyness does
    as well, but they cannot hide
    it is U
    U are...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is it me
    the love i feel i know its u
    so close to paradise
    hidden in the waves of love
    but through a diamond
    you made me feel something
    this scribe reaches deep
    and i most confess
    i feel the power
    as the love takes me


    i love the enegry of this right here
    it took above the skies
    had me floating as the
    essence of you surrounds me


    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside my day
    i vision u clear
    i see ya radiant
    beauty gleaming
    da shadow move
    and our birth of
    love sweep us
    closer and humble
    my heart dance in
    the orbs of ya essence
    and my soul grasp ya
    body in warmth
    the hour nolonger long
    like seconds
    the beat of affection
    whispers i'm compelled
    i now see the definition
    of your loveth
    let me shower u my Queeneth
    u know who u are i so pose....


    Thankz for the flowz and beat into my Nu Wave sista's
    watz , Angel
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa....Rich I must say, that was beautiful...
    There is nothing more wonderful than for a man
    to reassure his love...through such beautiful poetry
    Your heart...spoke volumes that will echo throughout eternity
    inside the soul of that love that each of you share...

    Beautiful Work!

    and even the responses...."Awesome"...
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    u are...
    it is you
    no contractions in my space
    no shortened forms
    u...you
    wider than the seven seas
    larger than all fantasies
    you
    deep
    depths of love
    embraced...
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sista Sage your words just full of warmth

    thankz sista deepy yes it u
    as the space of love is captured
    in the grace of essence
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one knows how to lay it down sweet like you, brothah. Lovin this one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sista Gempis w/luv
     
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    as usual, $$RICH$$ your words can make a parrot fall silent for years!!! that was just beautiful!!!!!
    and alla ya'll who replied in poem, are just legend!!!
    i think you've all found your greatest fan!!!! :kickball: :number1: :number1: