Black Poetry : U and Perfection r just alike

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  1. Timmytim04

    Timmytim04 Member MEMBER

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    U and Perfection r just alike POEM!! CHECK IT!
    U and Perfection r just Alike
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    > They say money rules the world and so do bullets
    > and with out u im like a dollar short of living life to the fullest
    > we a black and white pair like them girls from clueless
    > and f**k lookin fresh if u asked id walk shoeless
    >
    > Cuz im strong as Iron but even iron gets rusty
    >
    > cuz Got this thin boy sweating like he's Husky
    > and I jus want u around like ur biggy and im puffy
    > And if someone ever hurt u they gon have ta cuff me
    cuz like new york ima get Ugly "son Trust me!"
    >
    > prime example... ur laura winslow and im urkel
    > and i jus keep throwin love at ur head like them vonage commercials
    > cuz U don't speak that bull**** like when u high on chronic
    > and im st..stu..stuck on ur words like im hooked on phonics
    what girl u know bumps oldies and loves the Rza!?
    And I aint in wutang but ima ghost face killa!

    U got me wanting 2 get butt naked
    so I could sing u D'angelo
    Cuz U something like a curly headed mya angelou

    and check this.....
    If God was ever lookin 4 a wife no doubt it be you
    and if he made me choose between your hapiness and life
    my days a be thru
    And If i had 2 go 2 war with the devil I'd be Straped 2 the BOOT!!!
    mark my bullets wit your name, so they laced with the truth
    cuz aint nothin on this life or the next thas Gon keep me from you!
    and If i had 2 give up sex till marriage 4 u!?!?..... it be coo!
    and I've never hit a girl but 4 u!? I'd smack 2!!!

    cuz im engulfed by your presence
    like venom I'm consumed
    id carry your soul wit me
    like a baby in the womb

    and as u chipp away my armor
    exposing my inner most parts
    I dont need a doctor 2 know
    your hand repaired my heart


    And they say love is blind Which explains why
    I can only see u when I close both eyes


    and as your strength scares them,
    it rewards me
    my only struggle is not putting U before HE(pointing up)

    and if i sound jelous it's cuz your man
    > gets 2 touch u ina way i cant
    > mad cuz im the roots and the stem,
    > he's just a leaf on the branch

    And No disrepect 2 u but ur man is played
    I can beat any above avg dude on below avg.day!

    AND NEVER WILL I recognize defeat
    ch2eck mated by a black queen
    but with u this king is never beat

    cuz ima shark and ur blood we was destined 2 meet
    ment to walk hand and hand beside destiny's feet

    > and as u teach me 2 comprehend things I could never understand
    > Its amazing how u find time 2 pump fuel 2 this hand
    > Cuz one drop from your frames
    > cause my pad 2 set fire
    so many burning thought in my brain
    > i guess im the ghost rider
    >
    > I'n simpler terms u the thumb and I'm the lighter
    > and 4 you id stay in the streets like Cadillac tires
    > I jus wanna hear your thoughts like ur minds been wired
    >
    > and Yo forget them this is me and u talkin
    i wanna take u 2 the highest of highs
    so i can gaze into those brown eyes
    and sketch the beauty in the reflection of the sunrise
    cuz u the type a woman i wanna see in my sunseyes!


    cuz the light from your smile could put apollo ina daze
    i light that the sun envies and the moon only dreams
    a light that that that even heavens never seen

    Its so obvious u got me shook
    And if Given a chance,
    we could be the jungle fever version of the note book

    cuz u control this heat that i speak
    this venom that i spew
    and all them other chicks.....I'm like "move trick! get out the way cuz
    U blockin my view"
    cuz ill I ever wanna see every morning is u

    And when we hug i feel the wings on ur spine
    ur soul is pure as fiji water yet sweet as wine
    u priceless! ina world that glorifies dimes!
    and if i cant physically Touch u... than ima clutch u in my rhymes

    This Poetry gets mistaken for a hymn, cuz ur description is so divine
    and ive baked each word, i jus hope u savor each line
    and may God Strike me down if Lying
    No man can walk in my shoes cuz u got me flying
    and my body misses u baaad when u not next to me
    Giving new meaning 2 the term muscle memory

    and i respect u stayin faithful
    That jus proves 2 me ur worth
    I jus wanna step into a new life with u
    like twins being birthed!

    And if u stay jus make sure the price is right
    Cuz if we was lost id sacrafice his life!
    and If u need food for thought
    i'd cook u verbal rice
    cuz my minds SOLID as ROCK
    he's jus refrigerated ICE.......
    and you can't be bought but on ebay u'd set a record price

    and my broke *** wouldn't buy u once but twice

    whuts it gonna take for you and I 2 come 2gether

    cuz i can promise you this and I will Cum 2gether!
    ..cuz u make me wanna turn life a crime so u could be my last meal....
    And I aint tryna be nasty im jus tryna keepin it real
    Then id Kill, so they can sentences me 2 death
    so i can speak love 2 u even in my last breath
    cuz i cant be killed when u give me life
    ill jus die and resurrect cuz u make me Christ

    searching 4 perfection so i could name her wife
    but I agree with God ur name sounds just as nice
    And only way I had the nerve 2 tell u this
    was 2 spit it thru this mic
    I just hope u can excuse the fact that im the whitest shade of white
    when it's obvious u and perfection r just alike
    2 bad i still aint your man right?
     
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    BallOfConfusion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Omg! I loved this so much. Everything you wrote I hope I have one day. I loved the wittiness of it also great job keep up the good work.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    scribe on to what's real and felt
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    poet

    please remind me to stay on your "good side"

    lol

    man you said it to the reals on this hea

    peace
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was so beautiful.
    I hope you get the courage to tell her.
    But if you don't....call me honey.
    'Cause I would.....%&^*$@.
    Let me shut up.
    This is hot like this 91 degree weather here.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    91 in detroit?

    how is detroit warmer than NYC?????

    and you're closer to the north pole??!!!

    lol

    just teasin' Sweet Baby Face
     
  7. Timmytim04

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    much love much love ....soulja keep providing me with lines liek the first 1 and u gonna stay on my good side LOL!..
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey, I was sweating pork rinds today.
    It was so hot. I sitting at the computer naked.
     
  9. Timmytim04

    Timmytim04 Member MEMBER

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    i sit at my computer naked even on cold days....lol im playin.....
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Timmytim:
    WOW and WOW....
    No... Da#mn...
    Poetry doesn't have a color and this is indeed
    a HELLA SCRIBE!!! I really hope you read this
    to her. I was like OMG....dude got it bad, got it bad.lol
    But for real I enjoyed this write very much .
     
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