Black Poetry : U Aint Sh**

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you never had a reason to just not care
    i guess as time moved on i became unprepared
    i had my heart locked in chains, but i gave u the key
    then u opened it up and did what the rest did to me
    i slowed down so that you could catch up
    i even fixed that heart that others messed up
    i brought excitement and trust to the table for u
    you brought grief cuz thats all u were able to do

    u aint shi*...
    ur not the queen i thought u were
    u aint shi*...
    ur not that rare jewel that i claimed
    u aint shi*...

    u know i had the offers, i even had the sensation
    but i didnt fall into the traps of temptation
    i never put u or i in the situation
    and if i came close, i backed off without hesitation
    then here u go, f**k with a chic that dont know sanitation
    u went from a 10 to a 2- u didnt even make elevation

    u aint shi*...
    ur not the one in my dreams
    u aint shi*...
    ur not that angel with golden wings
    u aint shi*...

    i changed for u, even tho i was content with my being
    my friends told me u were wrong for me, but i didnt see it
    instead i was blinded by ur beauty that lead me down this fast track
    i put up with ur games, but tricks are 4 kids and im pass that
    i turned down a lot of opportunity that were worth more than this
    i kept on giving and i didnt even earn more than i risked
    u even had me believing it was my fault, i kept on trying to better myself
    but the problem got worse and it turns out that u settled with someone else

    u aint shi*...
    ur not worth my money nor my goals
    u aint shi*...
    u dont deserve to be pleased thruout the night
    u aint shi*...

    i had to start blazing so id get dazed and start floating too
    u hated it, but u didnt know that was the only thing that stopped me from choking u
    i tried to walk away, but for some reason i kept running back
    then i finally woke up and now im living my life on the right track
    and when we talk and u can tell that im not thinking about u
    u try f**k with my head with ur sexy voice - nice try, nice move
    but im done with it, had my fun with it, someone's knockin at my door
    we had love, but u messed it up, now im out of love and i dont want it back anymore

    CUZ U AINT SHI*!
     
  2. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It seems like u took these words right out of my mind..I am in this situation right now..I like the way you flowed with this...Much Love Rico
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U RICO, STAY STRONG MY BRUTHA CUZ IT DOES HURT AT TIMES. TIME HEALS PAIN AND WHATEVA ELSE
     
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    Is this the poem you were talkin bout? I don't think it's mean just raw deep feelins flowed on paper and I like this I really do nice to feel the wrath of yo pen :) luv ya until next time

    keep flowin
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang girl! this is tyte! I think we've all been right here before.. Keep on keepin on though :wave:
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u SwtT and Serenti, madd love...
     
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    felt the heat come up off this piece!
    diggin your flows keep speakin' on it!
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx skrybe7
     
  9. PrincessFlowz

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    WOW...nice....i like the way it was written...it made me feel the pain, hurt and pissivity(i know thats not a word but....hey im a poet what can you say) lol nice work:)
     
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    I feel Ya!!! nothing worst then to find out that the one you thought was the one! AIN'T...... Nice write could feel the emotions with each line..... And guess what! you didn't lose anything worth keeping (smile)

    Keep Flowing......

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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