Black Poetry : U ABANDON ME (BEST FRIEND)

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  1. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U ABANDON ME
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow .............
     
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    I certainly have been here poet. And it's scary to know that there is someone in this world who knows so much about you, and they aren't that special someone to you any more. It will get better brotha, feeling your words.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Again thanks for appreciating the piece. It still boggles me how people become lovers and then the next minute, they're enemies and you dont even know how u ever got to that point. Peace!
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling estranged? hmm.. welcome to the club.. i liked this piece.. feel me.. i feel you!
     
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    nice flow...enjoyed it
     
  7. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the love
     
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    I can relate as well bigdrizzle. And the funny part is, even after u get to the point of enemies, and finally accept that, here they come again wanting to be back in love again! huh??? :yesno: Great poem, I'm feeling you!
     
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    Locks changed, first step ^5 ...
    for to love, is to live...
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    to live is to learn
    You are the captain of your ship, ...there are Waves, and there's ripples...yet we keep sailing.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the all the love & support
     
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