Black Poetry : type of love

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  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    I want a love like me,
    thinking of you, thinking of me,
    thinking of you type love

    or, me telling my friends more than I've ever admitted to
    myself about how I feel about you type love

    or, hating how jealous you are, but loving how much you
    want me all to your self type love,

    or seeing how your first name just sounds so good next to my last name,
    and s**t, I wanted to see how far I could get without
    calling you, and I barely made it out of my garage.
    See, I want a love that makes me wait until she falls
    asleep then wonder if she dreaming about us being in love
    type love,

    or who loves the other more,
    or what she's doing at this exact moment,
    or slow dancing in the middle of our apartment to the music of our hearts,
    closing my eyes and imagining how a love
    so good could just hurt so much when she's not there.
    S**t, I love not knowing where this love is headed type love.

    I want to place those little post-it notes
    all around the house so she never forgets how much I love her type love then not have enough ink in my pen to write
    all there is to love about her type love.

    Hope that I make her feel as good as she makes me feel, like believing that her being in my life makes me a better person type love

    or I want her to distract me form whatever I'm doing type love
    and I want to deal with my friends making fun of me the
    way I made fun of them when they went through the same kind of love type love.

    Only difference is this is one of those real love type loves.
    and just like in high school, I want to spend hours on the phone with her not saying anything,
    then fall asleep then wake up with HER right next to me,
    and smell her all up in my covers type love

    I want to try to counting the ways I love her, and then
    lose count in the middle just so that I have to start all
    over again type love
    I want to celebrate one of those month anniversaries even
    though they ain't really anniversaries, but doin' it just
    cause it makes her happy type love.

    And I want to break down the time we spend together into seconds just so it sounds like we spend more time together type love
    And check this, I want fall in love with the melody the
    phone plays when her number is dialed into it type loves

    and then talk to her until I lose my breathe, she leaves me breathless, but with the expanding of my lungs I inhale all of her back into me
    I want a love that makes me need to change my cell phone calling plan to something that allows me to talk to her longer
    because, in all honesty, I want to avoid one of them high cell phone bill type loves.

    I want a love that makes me regret how small my hands are
    I mean the lines on my palms don't give me enough time to love her as long as I'd like to type loves,
    and I want a love that makes me st-st-st-st-stutter just thinking
    about how strong this love is type love.

    I want a love that makes me want to cut off all my hair
    Well, maybe not all of the hair
    maybe just cut the split ends and trim my mustache, but
    it will still be a symbol of how strong my love is for her.

    :playball: :smokin: :smokin: :smokin:
     
  2. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *Snaps* *Snaps* *Snaps* *Snaps*

    Tight Werk Perfomance Poet.

    Clear Imagery, theme and scheme throught entire piece. nice work.
     
  3. Ireadastory

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    This is so deep kinda love right here, some can picture and feel it type love. Love this drop. Flow on!
     
  4. angelicsage

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    You are too beautiful to “truly” be of this earth… :kiss1:
    This was a sensual blend of charcoal rubs...
    And thumb prints smeared to create, just the right gradation…
    Pulling me in and leading me deeper…
    with an occasional surfacing for air…
    Jazz and auburn sunsets…on a Smokey stage
    With a spotlight that struggles through the swirls
    Of brilliance that beam back without contest…

    It tis’ melodious prose such as this…that make
    Molasses sweet, and cally lilies so sensually sleek…
    And my soul meek…as I read…feeding the insatiability
    that grows…whenever I reach to touch the hem…
    Of your prose…
    only God knows how you manage to wrap me in every fold…
    Every wave…stronger than the next…until I’m swallowed whole…
    by the sweetest thing I’ve ever known…
    ”You”….

    Baby…if it gets any mo betta I will spontaneously combust.. :bomb:

    I’m loving you…as if it isn’t already evident,
    Like grape now~or~laters... :wink:

    As ever the Angelic,
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mad love to dis one it was awesome tyte
     
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    And what an intense type of love this seems to be. Flow on poet, we'll all just wade in the depths of this....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hookup man i have to give u mad props here
    as i read it again this one on hit to perfection
     
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    Lovin' this to the core.
    Bringing it back to the top.
    P.S. Somebody report hookup
    to the DBMP(Destee Bureau of Missing Persons).
     
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    Nice....!!!!!!!!
     
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