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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I found my clock ticking away
    but tymeless to what thy heart had to say
    each hour dat past
    contour to the love we has
    as my soulful spirit open up
    for your words and lovin cares

    I speak from da soul of my spirit
    and what we share is tymeless
    every moment of our exsistance
    we been on waves and twisted roads
    cross at the fork of desires
    yet we came peaceful in harmony

    I stand here watching the clock
    tic and toc numbers moving
    like our wholesome beings as we let go
    as we give a treasure to lost not found
    and speechless day of morrow
    i now cry in the darkness of my slumber

    You are tymeless when i think of u
    your eyes like foreverness
    and lips of forgiveness
    like time before me i love u more
    wish u come back while time awaits u
    or shall i just walk away in tears
    with my only words of bye !
    Tymeless love.
    :bye:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you love her more, that love should incline your feet to walk toward, not away from that love. Could be that with time, she loves you even more as well. Melancholy, yet still, a beautiful feel to this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime thy feeling guides thy feet from the emotions felt to walk away then forward
    Thankz a million sis.
     
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    That was a beautiful and passionate write. I enjoyed reading this as always.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u dear , it was fun creating it too .
     
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    Hey Rich
    Wow! sigh
    I don't know what else to say
    at this time. Only that
    I truly am feeling this piece.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    I'm speechless...When I read this I felt like I was sitting in the window, watching the rain drops beat against the window pane, as I thought about and remembered my once true love!

    Heartfelt and Eloquently written!!!!
     
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    Thank u sister Bluewater

    Thank u sister HopelisRomantic , it do have that kinda effect and warmth that
    bring on memories of the yesteryears
     
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