Black Poetry : Tyme she know

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Your beautiful soul calls me deep​

    awaking me from my slumbering sleep
    speaking of two who lone to know
    as we pass inside the love's door

    I've felt you beyond compare
    and envision your cascading nudity so rare
    forth my heart this i now bare
    i kissed u a million time and loved u a million more
    inside da depth of your inner core

    We passed line words and hope
    wonder and wished beyond our body stroke
    i need u like u need me '
    time we stop kidding and make us a we

    I gotta let you know
    how my true love opens and pour
    my heart now calls u at night
    as i pray that this love come to light
    and that everything is alright

    I want u to know i care
    and ready to give without compare
    u must feel me and know i'm there
    u are my dream come true

    come love me as i do
    as i so loveth u boo.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With feelings oh so strong
    written with such care
    There's no way she can't know
    and echoes the feelings you share
    For in her heart...
    you exist there
    And the impression you leave
    She'd recognize your imprint anywhere

    It's your undeniable touch
    your unique mark
    That makes her dreams dance
    And gives her luster an extra spark
    It's as though she was walking blindfolded
    and you lit a candle in the dark

    Surely, you reopened her eyes
    to love...
     
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    very lovely piece! it's tyme that she knows!

    blessings,
    Desert Storm
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    awwwww

    PLAYA PLAYA

    lol

    do the thing $$$RICH$$$

    do the thing
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Story :)

    You just described my current situation perfectly. Very nice flow! Your passion in your art is definitely always felt :)
     
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    I use to have an old saying:
    "If you love me, let me know...
    If you don't, please let my heart go!!"

    so, my dear man...if you do love this Lady, tell her so,
    for sure you'll see her hidden glow.
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u family as i speaketh da mind
    tyme to let her feel my shine as we dance
    in the radiant pool of love , spoken in depth
    as da king above ......Thankz again
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I want her to truely understand
    what i'm about, who i am as a man
    what i bring deep inside my stance

    Break her away from her deep past
    shower her inside a new life romance
    bring her inside da temple of everlast

    Be that lover , brother hubby & friend
    one she can define comfort and care in
    be dat ear of intently listening
    partake in lip 2 lip tongue twistin kissing


    Be her soft walk in the park
    her protector late night of da dark
    give her my solo heart
    so she see here's where true love start

    I wanna give her mental stimulation
    sensual beauty of warm compassion
    so she feel da depth of sweet affection
    that will allow heart to beat again

    I would love thee beyond my heart
    yet way deep down in my soul
    where only two will ever dewell
    that's her and my personal saviour

    Tyme she know and let da old go
    release da fears and all it's steam
    embrace me the man of her dream
    know i am da shoulder forth she lean

    Tyme she know through my reality
    that life is beautiful and our formality
    we no longer in da pit of casualty

    I wanna be the embracing arm
    the heart & soul to keep her from harm
    and be felt as da tender gentle charm
    and her beautiful late night storm

    Tyme she know da love of growth
    be thy Queen of my choice
    together we be of each others voice

    Tyme she taste real devotion
    because through her eyez i know Gods real
    from what was gracefully instill
    and that he made her just for me

    Tyme she know she the other half to me
    and by fate this what is to be
    and make us a lasting we

    TYME SHE KNOW !

    :hearts2::luvu::hearts2:
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, Sir Richness...

    I agree its time she know, because an expression this beautiful should not go unspoken!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: $Rich$

    For your unwavering passion to do that thing you do when
    you write the way you write about....the word.....love.

    BE U Ta FUL.....:hearts1:


    epiphany:heart:
     
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