Black Poetry : two words

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rahstagal, Jan 8, 2004.

  1. rahstagal

    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Close your eyes and envision as I am living in a world where men nor women understands the language you speak and every other race particularly one in trying to be superior. When you try to strive for whats best thats when they become alert like a hawk in reach of its prey. Thats when they react by bringing you back again...and again...and again...and again.
    Having the nerve to smile and tell lies in your face feeding this ever-growing egos.
    Overwhelming you with frustration; a new battle in our generation.

    I only have two words. .....****....You....


    Now, I feel that men, from my very own girth; same pigmentation are among those who bring about treachery.
    Treachery to our women who have powers unlike the immortal; giving life; bringing men into our midst.
    Virtuous Queens.....they maybe....Who are broken down......Envisiong ways to ease pain from within...

    Well, I only have two words. .....****....You.....
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this sounds like some man hater ish...
    but i don't know you like dat...
    so instead i'll say...tyte piece
    please share more...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt scribe indeed
    flow mo...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok i likes this drop
    flow on
     
  5. rahstagal

    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow khasm baby, rich my brotha im truely sorry about the context, but im glad you can still take it like a man ofcourse.....mzblkangel im glad you liked it......
     
  6. PositiveMindset

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    Wow, my 1st time disagreeing with brother Khasm, cuz how I take it, it's about the dudes that act this way, so it's not about all men... is it?

    If I'm right in my interpretation of this piece, I can feel U with this.

    Nice.
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The beauty of poetic intrepretation!

    It's all good in this hood! Say what ya wanna say long as it's done in
    a creative way! We turn the page this way and that and we all see something
    different. My thoughts were with my first brother, that this was male bashing.
    But that in it's proper context is appropriate, Lord know's this forum has rung
    with the term ******* and ho's...YA KNOW! Thank God for the 1st ammendment.
    "I may not agree with what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it."
    Keep doing your thang...might wanna phonetically spell the curse words though!
    I still knew what the two words were any how!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  8. rahstagal

    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why thank you ever so much Positivemindset, for someone reason negativity always comes to mind, but you take the time to interpret....thank you my brotha... your time has been appreciated..
     
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