Black Poetry : two (who we once were)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Aug 28, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She arched her back,
    sighed and told me to
    pass under

    walking beneath the waterfalls
    of her bodily libations left me
    twin to her

    wet

    we slide upon each other until
    a quarter after fourteen in the morning
    that's what the sexual moon dial read
    to us in lunar language

    she

    let her hips speak to me
    on tongues / I didn't
    understand what she was
    saying but she tasted good

    sandelwood

    was the scent that rose and the smoke
    composed a screen that hid
    us from onlookers through the screened in
    window

    animals

    that wandered by but understood our
    moans translated into the language
    of the very beginning before we were
    homosapiens /

    stopped

    and cryed along with
    the rest of the populace of
    the night until they

    fell asleep
    and saw us in another life

    maybe,

    we will be the branches
    of a majestic tree reaching out
    to one another until
    our trunk dates us five score

    and the

    animals

    will chase each
    beneath a moon
    that will tell stories
    of who we once were

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaK-NeSs.


    imma stop asking you for favors...

    cause i'm tired of being left breath-less
    by the beauty&wonder found in your words!

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    ... You wrote this so well, hell even I remembered! :lol:

    Had me sippin' on a smoothie and readin' each verse ...and while holding my mental flashlight you kept me lookin' for your footprints on the hard wood floors leading to my bedroom ... :wink: Even lookin' at the bay window that we'd sit silently & reminisce together ... brushing up against one another in thoughts ....

    mmmmmm mmmmm mmmmm -- YOUZ A BAAADDD MAAANNNN!

    Damnit! You just put me on like dat! Do your thang papi!!


    :D


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  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALL SMACKS

    MAN U FLIP DA SCRIPT HERE!
    DO YO THANG!:toast:
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uhh Bruh!!! This was all DAT!!! I want to be like you when I grow up man!!!
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    basking...

    ...in the illumination of your poetic words!
    this is a work of art-words~
    you used them very well here...

    applause~
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow was illuminated in
    chocolate ecstacy colored by
    the midnight blue of the outside
    shaded by trees...
    thank you for the vividry....
    -7:spinstar:
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Does your mother know how brilliant you are??
    Somebody hurry...dial the phone...and if she doesn't answer..leave a message

    *prodigal-son*
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, very nice, blak. it is always a pleasure to read yo wonderful scribes. i thank you for the experience:eek:.
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm hummm

    what they said is sho nuff true. lovin the funkiness of this here





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