Black Poetry : Two Panthers

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walking stealthy
    In circles
    One after another
    Pacing slowly
    Carefully
    Two sleek Black Panthers
    Caught up in fervent heat
    Mouths salivating
    At the thought
    Of coming together
    Tasting each other’s essence
    They soon engage
    Mating
    These two creatures
    Embodiment of midnight’s mystery
    Licking each other
    As the female
    Lays down
    And allows
    The male to mount her
    Stroking her frame
    With his firm paws
    Entering in
    Grabbing hold to her thighs
    Letting out a growl
    Of exultation
    As she constricts
    Her thigh muscles
    To tighten around
    His love shaft
    She meows
    Like the smallest ***** cat
    As the night air
    Kisses her cheeks
    And all the creatures of the night
    Fall into silence as these two
    Ebony warriors
    Become one flesh
    Side to side
    In and out
    He probes to areas
    That has never been explored
    Deeper than any has gone
    Because he has touched her soul
    Realizing this is destiny
    She releases all inhibitions
    And totally gives herself
    To her mate
    Mind, body and soul
    Her claws dig into his scalp
    As she embraces him
    As if holding on for dear life
    Pulling him closer
    Until her firm breasts are
    Literally pinned flay against her chest
    With her legs clamping down around his waist
    She thrusts upward
    To meet his downward force
    Hurting but feeling good
    She feels her essence flow out of her
    As his flows into her
    Their
    Creative juices combining
    To give birth
    To a work of creation
    Two Panthers of the Night
    Extending the hour of midnight
    To an eternity
    The moon and stars witness their union
    The creatures of the jungle
    Are in awe
    Themselves experiencing
    Mental orgasms
    Just by watching
    This phenomenon
    As the two continue
    Their moans
    Are heard throughout
    Moans
    Of joy
    Moans
    Of
    Gratification
    Satisfaction
    Their bodies aching
    But they can’t let go
    Climax after climax
    Their actions intensify
    As sweat pours from their bodies
    Like waterfalls
    Bodies sticky and wet
    Sounds coming from their
    Essence soaked torsos
    Covered in each other’s juices
    The smell of intercourse in the air
    Intoxicates them more
    As they become drunk with passion
    Tongues licking each other faces
    They can’t stop
    They will not stop
    Until the final star falls
    Into the sea of dawn
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

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    this was incredible...i love the word choices, the topic...just everything....this is really a great poem...
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am speechless Bishop but then again with your work I'm always am you are so beautiful in so many ways, such a wonderful poet. SO much luv in so many words
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Bishop dis on point and flowed in much flava
    Tyteeeeeeeeeee as alwayz
     
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    cleaning my claws and pausing for 1 minute! tyte!
     
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    God d$m.......<~jaw opens n won't close...Ver tyte scribeB.......very very VERY nice :jawdrop:
     
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    dude...
    your poetic pictures of passion are priceless
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Very nice how you place those animal emotion Grrrrrrrrrrr..I like it
     
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    :) :) :)... i see why your loves favorite son... my, my, my... peace
     
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    Thanks for the Love.....
     
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