Black Poetry : two of a kind (a girl and women)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticAngel, Oct 3, 2003.

  1. PoeticAngel

    PoeticAngel New Member MEMBER

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    my first poem on dis site i wrote it a while ago though

    :eek: =girl
    :rolleyes: =women

    :eek: i used to run the blocks everyn**** in his right mind wanted me
    legs open keep ya mouth shut
    speak when spoken to
    thats what i was told to do

    :rolleyes: im mature and optimistic everyday
    i advocate self-acceptance
    avoiding altercations especially with these so called men
    who at a young age take our innocence
    and wit simple words make us want them
    but i as a women find the HISSES of the ****** on the street corner bland and unattractive

    :eek: i love it when they stop in they cars
    ask a few questions all the while wonderin whats fillin out my jeans
    i feel in charge when he cateers to my wants and needs
    it took u women a long time to get where u are
    but ima women while im still in my teens

    :rolleyes: your talk is cheap your young and cacophonous(unpleasant to talk to)
    these ****** today are not who they say they are
    your credulity is gonna get u knocked-up and u gonna love him til he knock-u-out
    and get him lock-up like he does every two years
    you seem to only think your intellegent wit ur pants down
    but i know how the world goes sweety
    your carelessness is whats holdin u down

    :eek: u hide behind your bills, and checks waiting to be cashed
    to tell me what im doin is wrong
    im detined for the top
    im infamous on my block
    u dont know **** ur just a women who lived many years
    so u think u have seen it all
    but i know what the streets is like
    and they keep pullin me in

    :rolleyes: your stuborn and i am wise
    your synthetic and i am real
    i am a women and u are a girl
    we are two of a kind
    we have an equal voice but u just have to learn to use urs
    dont regret what u do but learn from people older than u
    i live the life u have an ran the streets like you to
    grow up little girl but not two fast
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome from above da man of love
    nice flow drop mo and sho sum love back
    dis flow is tyte happy u join us in scribe!!welcome:)
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome :wave:PoeticAngel
    very nice flow
    looking forward
    to reading more
    Peace
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome PoeticAngel

    glad to have you here sis :)
    flow on
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome PoeticAngel :wave:
    like the flow
     
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