Black Poetry : Two Killers, One Bullet

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  1. BlackVision

    BlackVision Member MEMBER

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    When two wills collide,
    It often leads to homicide
    When their street rep's on the line
    Egos entangled in a grueling test of superiority
    An identity crisis that results in uneven casualties
    While families mourn over senseless violence
    Trivial matters magnified to deathly circumstances
    No compromises,
    Just silence followed by guns clapping
    Some people like their beef served tender
    While others like their beef served bloody rare
    In any season for any reason,
    Seasoned killers will hunt
    The chase is for the game,
    Who threatened to take their place
    Only someone who wants to die
    Would ever threaten a person who has nothing to lose
    Often it’s the one that has too much to prove
    That has everything to lose
    Both sides blinded by too much pride,
    Will kill over anything especially for respect
    Held in each other’s contempt,
    They contemplate murder
    To decide the demise of their adversary’s life
    Cold blooded and calculating,
    They only feel heat when they’re “holdin”
    Criminals by nature, like an evil omen
    Companions of misery
    They feed it constantly
    Equaled in sheer audacity
    By sharing the same capacity for pain
    Yet only one has fear in his heart
    While death fears the other
    Two shots ring out
    *BLAP!!! BlAP!!!*
    But only one is hit
    In one instant with one bullet
    The victim breathes his last breath
    All that's left
    Is a shadow escaping
    As the slain becomes a memory
    A lifeless testament
    To the legend
    Of a lone killer​
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  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    this played like a movie

    westside story type ish man

    this was off the scale

    peace
     
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    An excellent expose, Killa
     
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    this is

    this is a masterpiece family
    certified street masterpiece
    the detail was flawless
    and the cinematics captivating
    you need to write the script to

    Menace II Society 2: O Dog's Return

    blockbuster!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would it kill one of them to walk away? Initially if they're both unarmed, no. If at least one of them is packin, unfortunately the possibilities are high. Your word choice and detailed phrasing are superb. I am so glad that you are sharing your art with us!
     
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