Black Poetry : two hearts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Jan 14, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2003
    Messages:
    308
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Designer, student
    Location:
    Mo. City Tx/ Houston
    Ratings:
    +1
    it was actually a song
    i had to sing it to feel it
    i can't sing
    so i put someone elses voice on it when i wrote it


    Two hearts


    Lord

    Ohhhhhhhhhhh.

    Why??????

    Trying to make two g’s offa scratch off
    Seee
    We be hustling since
    We could walk on feet
    Since we were babies
    We trying to snatch
    Pennies
    Ohhhhh.
    How tides turn and I try to figure out
    How a young girl turned out

    And she trapped in the game
    Yeah
    And young boys got street fame
    See

    We grow to get money and rewards
    Some children get money for report cards
    Now I’m trying to steady get ends
    My friends???
    I often neglect
    All for the dollar you see
    It just does something for me
    What it is I can’t see
    How I used to be about a dream
    Now it all seems

    To be bout cash
    And trying to get something
    That doesn’t give me joy
    Its only pain if I don’t gain

    See……

    It’s like im in jail
    All this to propel
    But I can’t flyyyyy.
    Lord why dey do me like dat
    Im just to scrap
    A little for a rainy day
    Why it rained today
    Before I could save
    I was just tyring to hold on till I get paid

    I wanna know
    I wanna know
    I wanna know
    I I I

    Wanna know
    Tellll me why

    Tell me, tell me, tell me
    Ohhh
    Yeah, yeah can somebody tell me
    How
    To get paid today

    That’s all I want for Christmas
    My birthday
    A raise at work
    The loans I gave
    Paid back
    Yeah….
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    dis was str8 off da hook tyte drop on da real
    love how u came wit it
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    this was cool...i like :)
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  4. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2003
    Messages:
    308
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Designer, student
    Location:
    Mo. City Tx/ Houston
    Ratings:
    +1
    thank u

    fo sho
    only thing is i wish i was american idol
    or something!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    indeed my brutha indeed
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - hearts
  1. 1poetsought

    Black Parenting : Brittle Hearts

    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    519
  2. Kadijah
    Replies:
    10
    Views:
    1,294
  3. Kadijah
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    381
  4. BrittanyMalachi
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    424
  5. Desert Storm
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    388