Black Poetry : TWO FACE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we cross these kind
    who seem to shine
    living deep in tales & lies
    two face
    the death of growth
    a killer who work to toast
    a betrayer who enter
    to steal the worth
    and cause hurt
    seeking da mind to believe
    and they strike to spoil da
    tea or storm a dream
    if u listen to da screams
    two face
    place'd before u
    not as a friend but a beast
    feasting on the wits u pose
    da one who step with tippy toes
    lurk in da shadows wit doubt
    fishing to catch a trout
    freestyle hunger seeking prey
    dem lights and tongue word play
    but facts remain clear to see
    who's worthy and who is dear
    who will betray u and who will not
    mental mind well thought out
    Da art of an devil his servents
    they come but when it meet da
    middle groundz to spank :spank:
    it get hot :hot: and anger flair :mad:
    start looking wit no care :look: small smirk
    temple break making one wonder who! :confused:
    questioning why but know bull fly in defeat
    of self hate treat and seek a open to wiggle in
    bestfriends don't bring dismay
    and hearts of love don't hardden at play
    now the blaze is high :flame: the stakes low
    forgotten unity lay in tears
    united we fall become da fears
    bonding rubber links snap into
    what's left seem to be me and u
    as we lean on each other and build power
    become stronger and weather storms
    release da drama , dalima & what was
    to face what is in the fight of warz cast upon us
    Two face
    not sure if they sad or mad of lost
    but can't take it and wanna be boss
    two face is the voice of doubt
    and the eyes of fire dat's hot
    we are around them daily with the false face
    to win ya grace and steal da joy turn it into
    a personal toy these are faces we can't see
    true color roll from da seed planted in pertent
    remember to beware watch & heed da greed
    of da two face place'd upon ya

    TOGETHER WE STAND APART WE FALL
    ONE BAD APPLE DON'T SPOIL A BUNCH
    SOME WILL FOREVER BE FOOLISH
    SOME WILL SHINE IN DIVINE MIXTURE
    AND REAL FRIENDSHIP NEVER DIE
    IT ONLY MUL-TI-PLY IN HIGH VOLUME
    AND BESTORED NUMBERS BY THOUSAND

    HELTER SKELTER..... :mad:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautifully written
    at times we know not of a true friend
    as we turn to greet them in our life
    betrayal and stabs us in the back
    then thats when we know who is who...
    some walk blindly and some just have to
    go through the strom to be a better person
    what dont kill us makes us stronger....
    i think i wrote this right...
    but anyway this was posed well......
    and on point with all that good lesson we learn
    day in and day out...

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BESTORED TRUST OF THOSE WHO LOVE
    AND SLICE THE COMMON WHO LURKS
    KNOWETH OF THE BOMBER THAT CREEPS
    INDEED WE NEVER KNOW WHO OR WHAT
    AND WHEN THE COLOR IS SPRAYED BUT
    WE LEARN TO DEFEAT A SLAYER..........

    thankz for the visit to the untold land of evil
     
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    bang bang bang bang................ you got to coordinate son you see the mushroom interior, even got the belt,

    TYTE DROP RICH YOU KNOW IM A BIG FAN OF your work/ :hot: :flame:
     
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    I couldn't agree more for the wise words spoken...so very true.
     
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    word up THEONE !!!!
    we have to watch !
    listen & learn da worth
    for they come in many shapes , sizes
    and evil but hold this false face .

    sistah queen......
    it's a new day and rebirth
    trust was betrayed and thruth
    leep from da skin
    who fooling who now !?
    these the ones who are headed for self destruction
    peace & thanks y'all for da visit into my splat............
    peace
     
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    Rich,
    thanks for the good teaching, reminding, warning, and advice....

    U made me think about an old school song by the group Undisputed Truth called "Smiling Faces"

    "Smiling faces
    sometimes
    pretend to be your friend
    similing faces
    show no traces
    of the evil that lurks within......can ya diggit
    smiling faces
    smiling faces
    sometimes
    they don't tell the truth
    smiling faces
    smiling faces
    tell liiiiiiiiiiiiiieees
    and i've got proof

    Your enemy can't do you no harm
    Cause you know where he's coming from
    Don't let the smile and the hand shake fool ya
    take it from me, i'm only tryin to school ya"

    etc.............
     
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    indeed brutha u feel me and seen these kind before
    they lurk all around us daily da watchful third eye watching
    coz they are no strangers or friendz .....I love the reply
    it helps da expression of worth i speak of Thankz
     
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    This piece sort of reminds me of a series you had earlier this year Rich. Well, you know how it goes, some people aren't happy unless there is some chaos going on, and that mixed with a devious mind, is a dangerous situation. This was a strongly emoted piece, well thought out and posed.
     
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    Thankz i had to release it
    and bring light on the darken shadow
    dat lurks under cover wit da false smile
    and wordz of da devil that spills
    peaceeeeeeeeee!!! sistah
     
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