Black Poetry : Two Breaths 'till the end

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  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    two breaths and life departed ....
    two breaths and the tears started ...
    two breaths and no life remained ....
    two breaths and our yearning for you was maimed

    Ondria Machelle Glenn, no longer a seed of this earth
    Ondria Machelle Glenn, has received the ultimate birth.
    She's gone, and its hurting so deep
    But I'm glad to know that she's found peace in this sleep

    No more pains to bear, it's a joy she longed for
    No more stories to tell, no more bangin' on her door.
    She was tired, atleast that's what she always said,
    but I think she was just ready to take her rest in her heavenly bed

    It's okay now, you're at peace ...
    Rest now, my sister ... my cousin .... my friend
    Great joy you found ....
    two breaths 'til the end.

    IN MEMORY OF MY COUSIN
    ONDRIA MACHELLE GLENN

    OCTOBER 24, 1966- AUGUST 14, 2001
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is very very beautiful. Thanks for sharing a personal experience such as this, with us.
     
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    "so young to die"
    this is a beautiful peace
    thank you so much for
    sharing it....
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    I too...

    [SIZE=huge]...am, deeply,
    sorry for your
    loss. I'm also
    touched by
    the evident love
    you had for
    her, that brightly
    shines, through
    this piece;
    that she may
    rest in peace...:([/size]
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    in His everlasting arms...

    she lays to rest
    in heaven with GOD


    peacenblessings


    pd
     
  6. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I stepped

    lightly around this piece for a day...

    but I had to respond...and this has brought the tears. So beautifully expressed. Yes, there is sadness...for us who remain.
    She has found her reward. And for that we shall rejoice!

    beautiful

    Maggie
     
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    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU ...

    TODAY AS WE LAYED TO REST MY COUSIN, WE REJOICED, NOT IN THE LIFE THAT WAS GONE, BUT IN THE LIVES THAT WERE REBORN, THROUGH HER LOSS. WHAT A JOY, IT HURTS, BUT IT'S GOOD TO KNOW THAT SHE HAD SOMEWHERE TO GO TO, AND i'LL SEE HER AGAIN. I PRAY THAT RICH READS THIS, BUT I'D LIKE TO SAY, FIRST OF ALL, I LOVE YOU BROTHER ... AND REMEMBER IT'S ONLY A TEST YOUR GOING THROUGH, IT WON'T LAST ALWAYS, TRIALS COME, JUST TO MAKE YOU STRONG, GOTTA LITTLE BIT OF RAIN AND YOU JUST CAN'T GROW, SO ... HOLD ON, KEEP THE FAITH, DON'T GIVE UP AND REALIZE, IT'S ONLY A TEST YOU'RE GOING THROUGH.

    I LOVE YOU ALL, AND AGAIN I SAY THANK YOU

    ALICIA
     
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