Black Poetry : TWISTED

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can see
    You don’t have
    a clue…
    to weak to define
    what you do to me…
    I have unfolded all
    I could….
    Now its up in
    the clouds…
    My mind and heart…
    Holds the fire
    You built… caressin
    And touchin my mind…
    Slowly….you
    Seduce my heart…
    And played in….
    My soul…..
    You don’t know what
    You mean to me….
    To weak to define…..
    For you made me feel
    Once more…
    Gave me my joy
    Of lovin
    Once more…
    Handlin me with care
    Unfolded a bliss of emotions…
    Some old
    some new….
    But its all of you..
    This fire you built….
    Extreme joy….
    My soul
    Dances in itself
    To release
    You hold the key…
    My world is upside
    Down and twisted…..
    Tears of joy
    rollin down……
    and then you left
    me in the cold…
    so weak..
    you don’t even
    understand
    unfolded
    made
    produce
    touch
    hurt
    pain
    so so so
    weak you cant even define…..
    went far as I can
    now stop the ride…
    I gots to get off…..:eek:

    a blkangel thang:kiss:
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feeling this one...all to often they don't understand what they do to us...it hurts i know. much love for this.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love...thanks for the read...
    much love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime it's the wrong ride
    and eyes can't see nor ears hear
    but when it stop u walk away whole
    i feel ya here
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...thanks for the read
     
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    yes the ride can be a monster but it also can be a feast
     
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    wonderful
    strong finish
    feeling it from
    the top to the bottom
    much love
    Peace my sistah
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww sister Bluewater..thanks glad you like...much love
     
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