Black Poetry : Twisted (What You Made Me)

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  1. ki-ki2004

    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    Twisted,
    Uprooted, bended,
    But not lifted.

    Twisted,
    into you, by you, for you.
    Do I like it?

    Twisted,
    not straightly or neatly curved
    but zig-zagged with rough edges.

    Twisted,
    but not lifted
    Into you, by you, for you
    Like zig zags with rough edges.
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Do l like it?

    a good is a bad is a good twist...

    this is tyte with an underlying depth.

    jh.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this indeed
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely said i felt ya on dis one
     
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