Black Haiku : Twisted (What You Made Me)

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  1. ki-ki2004

    ki-ki2004 Active Member MEMBER

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    Twisted,
    Uprooted, bended,
    But not lifted.

    Twisted,
    into you, by you, for you.
    Do I like it?

    Twisted,
    not straightly or neatly curved
    but zig-zagged with rough edges.

    Twisted,
    but not lifted
    Into you, by you for you
    Like zig zags with rough edges.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    at the end every
    twisted rope of it all u
    fine peace valley wise
     
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    Ropes can have an end
    Only, Where does it begin?
    The twisted mind frame.


    Thanks for viewing this poem. I greatly appreciate it. :)*
     
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    twisted and entwined
    pushing and looping around
    the roots of the earth
     
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    I'm twisted in twine
    Threaded in your heart and mind
    Who will unbind me?
     
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