Black Poetry : Twisted Surgeon

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GwenDee, May 10, 2002.

  1. GwenDee

    GwenDee Member MEMBER

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    Back is twisted - my soul is wrinkled from shoveling thru your
    problems. Shifting mental loads cause lack of balance from all
    the zig-zagging of your highs and lows. Time for me to move
    from bandages to radical surgery. Think I will just jump up
    and begin to dance alone.
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes it just gets like this...where you just want to shut out the world, cut things loose and start again...a mental springclean..

    K
     
  3. alyce

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    so good to read you again, Sista GwenDee...I've been missing your poetic portraits. Your stroke is smooth and subtle, yet you render such powerful visuals in your word pictures. To say "I felt this"....is an understatement. More adequate words fail me.

    thank you for sharing... :heart:

    alyce
     
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