Black Poetry : Twisted Melody Tune.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twisted Melody Tune.....of Writers block...:help:

    Climbing mountains and turn corners..
    Rearranging words making phrases
    A cry of sadness..
    Friendship and bond…
    Singing a lullaby of love….
    Coloring my rainbow
    In the rain upon a star I now sit
    I found whom I was with out
    a shadow of a doubt
    My style in the depth’s of my prime…
    Delicate soul, warmth of love it took me
    to look in the mirror..
    As my life portrays on canvass
    in the form of a masterpiece..
    For my soul have become a Poetress.
    Ready for the world..and still growing
    The lines and the songs I pose like a
    Lily Diamond
    Shining bright….its my turn now
    And it’s so amazing…
    Have touch spirits and took a turn…
    And touched his heart
    The innocence of it all was two hearts
    Connected in the wind and interlaced
    of deep compassion pass the shooting orbs
    in a land of our own…In the starz
    For poetry have took my soul
    To write to you my sweet love
    Blue magic…..lets follow the scent…
    Passing vibes....on beat every time
    Rising heat....fire and desire
    Code blue about to take you across the wind…
    And sent you free..
    RED Alert!!!
    I am his ruby lover...
    Cocoa butta cream
    With the thick thighs
    and the brown eyes
    caramel dreams
    And sugary desires
    My love sweet love…
    Inside and out…
    Take them verbs and
    Compassion ally
    Wrap me in your warmth…
    Cover me fold me just hold me…
    My sweet thang..
    Love showers of adjectives and nouns
    Pronouns and vowels
    Rearranging words making phrases
    The lines and the songs I pose like a
    Lily Diamond shining bright….


    (C) 2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no block here tyte drop this dripped wit essence
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..thank you rich....i was writting to unblock the block
    happy you enjoyed it :love:

    Angel
     
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    Woah!

    This piece is poetically laid!
    I loved the play of words!
    and the way you arranged them!

    Absolutely scrumptious!!!!!!!
     
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    Some of your best pieces come when you have writer's block, sister. Heck, maybe you should get that once a month. ;) Just kiddin. This is thought provoking and imagery is rich. Diggin it.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    :lol:

    Ok. I enjoyed the twists and turns...the ups and downs...and the crazy turn arounds...my lady love. Ooops...that's a song. :lol: :D

    I enjoyed it.

    :thanks: for sharing your writer's block with us. :lol:

    :toast:
     
  7. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like it

    Ur poem makes me dream,i'm so far away...for sure u have the gift of words
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this... very pretty
     
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    No writer's block here, very well posed, in detail.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons..awww sis you are so kind thank you for the loving support
    i always know i got a giggle coming with your comments...thanks love ya!!!!!

    Monetary..what in the world...smh gotta love our brothers tru dat...thanks money for the love on dis.... :nuts:

    Lloyd..i am glad you enjoyed it thank you for the love

    gempis..LovelyGoldenOne..watzinaname..thanks for the visit

    thank you all for the trip inside my mental block
    Peace
    Angel
     
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