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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by info-moetry, Dec 21, 2004.

  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    Where is the luv between us
    Why don't we take it back to Genesis
    When you cheated on me with that snake
    And myself and Jehovah were the only witnesses
    But let me come clean though
    See I cheated on you too!
    I lied when I said we were the first created
    I had a girl across the garden, when you cheated I thought you knew
    One night the serpent caught me creepin
    But I didn't know it was his ex-girl
    He vowed to pay me back
    And have God kick me out into the next world
    That's when he pushed up on you
    But I should have schooled you to his wicked lies
    With the quickness he slid on you and started hissin
    Even winked at you with his wicked eyes
    I know your heart was with me
    But your mind, this demon had it trapped
    He lied and said that our God was keeping secrets
    And through this red thing, you could have it back
    Baby "imagine that, God is keeping secrets of good and evil from us"
    That's what you came home and said to me
    You had a strange thing in your hand, you called an apple
    That's what you fed to me
    I sat you down on the green pasture
    Asked you to just listen
    Said i forgive you baby
    But why is there a piece of my apple missin'
    You told me that the snake had you open
    So you opened wide and took a bite
    Said you had no idea
    It would change the way you look at life
    Then you passed the apple
    And I took a bite too
    Our minds became open
    I said except for 2 things honey, I'm looking like you
    We got scared and hid ourselves
    Now knowing that we were butt naked
    We used to take paradise for granted
    Now we know it's more sacred
    But it's too late
    Because our God is looking for us
    I should have known this wouldn't work
    I'm a Scorpio, your a Taurus
    Then we heard our masters voice
    "Where art thou, and why have ye hidden yourselves"
    Because we're naked and ashamed, we bit the forbidden fruit
    The devil said it would give us knowledge, but we were only kidden’ ourselves
    We're sorry God, we're sorry
    We won't let this happen again
    God said "I know", Now take your naked ***** down to the Earth
    While I think about forgiving you when I come back to judge around 2010!

    :happens:

    "knowledge is the lost property of the believer"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow as it speaks ...............
     
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    Thanks for sharing this piece poet. :darts:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're bringing back some nice ones Godssoulja. I really enjoyed this story infomoetry, flow on brotha.
     
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    God was keeping secrets, interesting line, felt throughout the whole scribe, peace.........
     
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