Quiet Poetry Lounge : Twisted Blood... ( bi-racial )

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Aug 3, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me be ....
    al that i am...
    and that is.....

    Human.....

    Let me be ...
    al that he made me for...
    dont close my world ..
    with youre judgement doors..

    Free me...

    Twisted blood
    take me to Tha Land of
    L O V E......
    Twisted blood
    take me to Tha Land of the
    H E A R T......

    Let me be ...
    a creation formed by His Hands..
    only polish me in good forms..
    woman or man...

    Let me be..
    a Flower for those
    who want to see..
    and if you dont like it ....

    dont look at me.....

    Just let me BE..
    let me...
    breath..
    eat..
    feed...

    but most of all.....

    Let

    me

    be

    ME.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this all i lone for
    is to be me
    twisted blood
    my
    life
    love'd dis here to the max
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista...ya pen has opened ya hearts door to allow you to be free...and it reads so beautifully :)
     
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    yes you are you
    this is a great piece
    wonderful
    you are you
    and that's what count
    loving your flow:heart:
    Peace
     
  5. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you sound free to me
    and as you long as you free yourself
    who else matters?
    just be, sistah!
    big ups! :spin:
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never alienate love-

    1poetsought ~
     
  8. egyptianeyes

    egyptianeyes Active Member MEMBER

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    Love yourself girl.. I am also bi-racial.. I feel that I got the best of both worlds.. We are unique. We are beautiful... peace, Egypt
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam...:heart:


    you all said beautifull treuu things..



    and i love myself...


    and i am free in gods light...


    untill they want to lock you up ..
    and put you in boxes....



    but i work myself out of it.....
    trough gods truth..


    I,m working on a poem called ....

    "'speak the language of children..."'


    starts with ...


    the children ..

    they...
    drawed me .....and ther paintings dont lie...









    Libertylady:heart:
     
  10. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a beautiful poem that reflects on who you are, just tryna be you.

    very heartfelt, and well written
     
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