Black Poetry : twistah

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Jul 10, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there was a girl,
    she was 14,
    every boy in that SCHOOL,
    wanted some of her thang,

    she was fast and outrageous,
    didnt know she could get contagous,
    she screwed all around town,
    everyone laid this girl down,

    till one day this queen
    loses her crown,
    caught AIDS and ended
    up six feet underground








    from ya sad poetic GODDESS, in mourning for the lives of others.
    :(
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only the real...I like the way that you wrote this. Short, but it carries a bigger message
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks t appreciate you takin time to reply and read my poetics
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so many so young
    fool around
    not understanding
    the real smack down
    until the crown is gone
    so so sad to see life wasted
    on the foolishness of sex
    we need to teach and reach
    our children as much as we can !
    tyte reality check
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanxs took the words out right out of my mouth