Black Poetry : Twista

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Mar 20, 2003.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As i sit in my lounge chair dozed back,
    I feel da wind hittin my knees as i start to relax,
    My body feelin chills all up and down my spine,
    And i said "what da h***" and i start to recline,
    I hear da wind driftin harder and harder,
    And da weather starts to cool down,
    Real quick, i headed back inside,
    So i wouldn't get wet, with tears in my eyes,
    Da rain started pourin down really fast,
    And my chills kept oozin back,
    10 seconds later, i see my chair gone,
    And all of a sudden, somethin else had gone wrong,
    I had no power, nothin at all,
    Then i seen one of da trees beginnin to fall,
    Power lines bein struck, and da neighbors being flung,
    Al over da place, like nobody expectin dis,
    Now i realized anotha storm was comin ,
    Nothin like a tornado, but it was a twista.

    AM:heart:
     
  2. Vyolet

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    LOL I was really not expectin this poem to take this turn. It's still good though.
     
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    i'm quite shocked,
    for it to be a twista.
    i thought it'd be about love,
    between a girl and a mister.
    but what can i say,
    it ain't my flow.
    i would tell you yes,
    but i got to say i don't know...........
     
  4. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    I'm pretty much feelin ya. Basically all i write is love poems. I've been writing for 4 years, but u'll see 1 comin soon. Good lookin out tho, i like ya flow.

    AM
     
  5. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a tight storyline, sista. very visual and well told. i'll bet you write a bangin' short story, huh...
     
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