Black Poetry : Twist Effects !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Lyrics and lines twist by design

    words move deep like it's a crime
    open eyez of da poetic blind
    and mask in shade wit it's rhyme

    I'm a blazzin saddle mixer of treats
    poetic words my lips will leak
    in da air ur hear them when i speak
    tasting da sweetness when they meet

    Pushin effects like ma' mable
    running wild out da stable
    poetry like food on my table
    wit an flair as long as i'm able

    When they leak it's passion n' fruit
    hot sassy and kinkin da boot
    from da lips words will shoot
    through da mind rapture will loot


    Heavy hittin to da conscious mind
    self awareness powerful intuition tyme
    higher achievement da light will shine
    my bliss of message is one of a kind

    twist effects of poetry and lines
    beats extreme on a lyrical crime
    beware when i shake up da rhymes
    and hit ya wit some of mines

    It is TYMEEEEEEEEE !!!

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    Da $R
     
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    TWIST EFFECTS !

    Got me all charged up

    Dis' is one of your greatest hits, $$RICH$$
     
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    Thank you bruh.......happy you get a charge from it like i did creating it !

    U know u been burning it up lately yaself ...fo real
     
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    A hot drop from Sir. Richness... this is fiyah!
    I especially enjoyed the quoted lines above!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    Thank u Coco...... I am on a mission poeticly therefore it is Tyme !
     
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    Rich - You put power in this Rich with an ability to grab the reader and hold with a poetic hand. Much props and I enjoyed. Amazing how Life is full of twists and turns. It is hoped that we improve because of them. Thanks Rich Namyh/HH
     
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    without a doubt we shall rise and improve upon our journey in life
    thank u for the visit my brother HH
     
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    you twisted this right into a masterpiece!
     
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    Thankz... ever so kindly my dearest , for every twist is a key to our upswing in life
    as we journey the path set forth....much love Angel2
     
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    Still feelin da twist effects
     
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